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Arg not a crapy ass fic I love  this and want  to see more when you can please thank you.

It's been almost a year... please tell me you haven't abandoned this story. It was nust getting good

I really enjoy this story! Please keep the chapters coming. I really like your mini comic explanations, they crack me up!

I like your story. It moves at a nice pace and you make the characters involving. However, you are having Loki and Thor use too much modern slang. The phrasing for both of those characters should be a little antique. It sounds trite, but try watching or listening to Shakespeare to get a feel for the rhythms of that kind of speech. (Not that I want to read this in iambic pentameter, oh no!) Other than that, I certainly do not have any other gripes about this story.

This story is wonder, I read all nine chapter and I wish I had another one. I hope steve don't report back to shield .

Good chapter please update soon:()