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Really? This was the place where I found this story. Maybe it's the length.

Loyal fan here, what's AO3? Also, loving your stories, still :)

Re: Chapter 10

That went...in a much different direction that I thought it would.O_o

Two things I took from this.

1: A fragment of the Venom suit/symbiote has been lying dormant inside Peter all this time and is exerting its influence more subtly instead of just trying to make him flip out and kill/eat things so it can get what it needs.

2: For a story that started so sexy (and still is), this sure as hell has gotten serious, what with Magneto outright killing Xavier at the end of this chapter. Wonder how Cyclops is gonna react, not to mention kudos for reminding us all that Ultimate Magneto is a hardcore monster compared to the rather noble and all-too-tragic villain he's portrayed as since Chris Claremont got his hooks on the X-Men franchise. I'm thinking that even if Cyclops realizes Magneto's gone too far and defects from his side to try to avenge Xavier, he'll either be dead at Magneto's hands in short order or he'll be shunned by the X-Men, Jean Grey especially, for joining Xavier's murderer in the first place.

I really do like the story and all, it is competent and has lots of twists and turns, but man, the name of it is sort of bringing me out of the "This is a serious story" mood. Especially after the last one! I mean, they're both great, but, uh, yeah!

I just started reading the fic, and it's pretty cool. Although I could've done without the monster/Jean bit (Wolverine.) It was SOMEWHAT mitigated by Peter being in Wolverine's body, but it was still the monster's body nonetheless. As you can see, I'm clearly not a Wolverine fan at all.

And this keeps getting better and better, or hotter and hotter. Peter-in-Wolverine and Dazzler going at it . . . quite the unexpected treat, especially for the banter and Peter being unable to turn his geek off (imagining it in Steve Blum's Wolverine voice makes it even funnier). Also, I don't blame him for wanting another piece of Jean; who wouldn't? Oh, and Wolverine-in-Peter going out into the fray as a leather-clad Spider-Man, confronting the Kravinoff mother-daughter tag-team? That sounds like it's going to be a bag of laughs, although Peter will have a lot to deal with when he comes back to his body, given all the crap Logan's done to and in it. Great work so far. Be a wonder if I ever get enough.

Awesome show so far. Some of that last chapter is a bit contrived/obvious, but not actually bad at all. More to come, I hope :)

Zev is doing a great job with this story. I'm very interested in where it is going and the sex is hot. Peter Parker, Sue Storm, Logan, Jean Grey, all characters are well delineated, believable and the kind of people that you can get your teeth into. Sue's dalliance with Peter is a sad commentary on her life as a super-nerd's wife, but is something that I can understand happening, given her circumstances. I can sympathize with her. The sex with Jean Grey could have been more detailed, but the space required would have been too great. Still, given that, it was hot stuff.

Great Storyline going here.

That was fun. I don't know whether to say that Peter's a lucky son of a bitch, or a poor son of a bitch. Former for getting it on with Jean Grey, even if in Wolverine's body and learning a thing or two about pleasuring a woman thanks to her telepathy. Latter for Logan fucking up his not-exactly-a-relationship with Sue, and the fallout from when he gets back to his body to deal with that . . . not to mention having to fight an angry ex-boyfriend with optic blasts in the follow-up to this. On a side note, Felicia, Silver Sable, Elektra, Mary Jane, and Gwen all semi-simultaneously masturbating to the live feed of Peter-as-Wolverine putting on a show with Jean and Mary Jane and Gwen discovering or exploring their bisexuality in the process thereof . . . awesome. Very fucking awesome. Gonna be seriously embarrassing --- and maybe arousing, too --- when Peter finds out that his two closest female companions were masturbating together to him doing it with Jean Grey, even if it wasn't exactly his body. Will be looking forward to how you follow this up.