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OK, that was really hot! Peter's a lucky SOB, and he didn't even have to do or say anything; they made the move for him!

I love Peter Parker's dated references. It doesnt seem right if he mentions a movie from this decade. Hot, over the top, comedic banter, everything great Spidey erotica needs. You are a very amusing pornographer. You make me nearly capable of sitting through Thor or Agent of S.H.I.E.L.D. just so I have the proper vantage point for your other fics.

Just read the first chapter and I enjoyed it. This was very well-written. It had great dialog and a good touch of humor. Mary Jane and Black Cat were a lot of fun. Mary Jane was a bit OOC, but it was still enjoyable. I wish there had been more details on her romp with Black Cat, but I think it set things up nicely. You also nicely captured the lingering tension between Peter and Mary Jane. It has been documented time and again, all the complications keeping them apart. It may be cliched, but you did a nice job of making it feel fresh. Keep up the good work. I encourage you to write more.

MarvelMaster616

Great beginning. Please update soon.

Still funny as hell. Hell, I like the banter more than I like the sex, and the sex is pretty good. Poor Peter Parker, trapped between two luscious beauties who love messing with his heads. As for Peter jerking it to Emma Stone, nice nod to her playing Gwen Stacy in The Amazing Spider-Man film series, even if I still think she'd make a better Mary Jane.

About the most hilarious Spider-Man lemony fic I've read in a good while. You really nail the good humor of the characters instead of just having everyone mired in angst. Hell, you're having Felicia and Mary Jane making fun (however affectionately) of Peter for being constantly mired in angst. And the disses to Carlie Cooper were nice, too, let's be frank; she might have been half-decent if Slott and Quesada weren't trying to push her as THE perfect love interest for Peter at the expense of Peter's other significant long-term relationships. Also being frank, the banter between Felicia and Mary Jane, as well as between Mary Jane and Peter before Peter fucked it up, really made this story, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter or several you can put out, as well as the progression on "Marry The Knight," because that is also an incredibly awesome and funny lemony fic.

So much fun. And fun is best bridge to bring Felicia and MJ together. I liked it a lot.