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December 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this short piece. It almost seems like it could be the first chapter to a longer one that really explored the tension between Rogue and Scott that went unexplored in the series. I think you could really pull off an interesting fic if you wanted to expand this, maybe centered on Scott's POV and the theme of it is that, as Kurt says, he's totally clueless when it comes to girls. (Like most of us were at that age.)
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November 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Nice little one-shot here. I enjoyed the chemistry between Rogue and Scott in X-men Evolution. I thought it was cute, albeit underdeveloped. You captured some of the dirtier thoughts that probably could never have made it onto the show, but you made it feel realistic. It was short, but satisfying. Great job! Keep up the good work.