Okay, so I realize that it has almost been three years now since you last updated this lovely little story of yours and I’ve to agree with the other revivers that you simply have to write more, because I’d love to know what’s going to happen, etc., obviously, laughs!
Which I just happen to absolutely love, despite the heavy theme in it, because rape is always a hard pill to swallow! In any way or form and this is no exception, because while I under no circumstances condone rape, I must confess; that I absolutely loved that particular scene in the second chapter, because it was so realistically written and beautiful described. I suppose I’m a little bit of a hypocrite, I guess or at least very perverted, laughs!
More so, the dialog between Thor and Loki was brilliantly done, they were very much in character I think, especially Loki. Everything else was extremely well written too, of course and the background story was simply amazingly well thought of, I also loved how you so effortlessly switched point of views between the characters, without actually pointing out which character it was from, because usually author’s write an entire chapter from one character and the next chapter from the other character’s p.o.v., or they write from character a) in the first half of the chapter and let character b) have the second half, which obviously works too, but I kind of prefer it when it’s done effortlessly, like you did with this wonderful masterpiece.
Which I now again, must implore that you’ll write more, that you haven’t abandoned this amazing story of yours, because I’d so love to read more!
In the meantime, thank you for sharing this with us, kudos! PS. I'm also going to post this very review on fanfiction.net, because I'm rather lazy, hope you don't mind, laughs! DS.
cant wait for more
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BronxWench,
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Please correct your disclaimer.
Your disclaimer doesn't have one of the two parts we need to see. You must use the actual name of the fandom. Just naming the owners/creators of the fandom, or saying that you don't own only the characters is not enough.
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BronxWench, AFF Archive Moderator