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Oh Update. i somehow missed commenting on this when I read the first few chapters. I quite like the concept of the gender reversed hero-world. All rather all female hero world. Fun times and some good characterisation of Pete. Still porno story or not I did find the whole 'want to be treated like a slut' thing not quite to my tasted.

By gosh the Ms Marvel/Pete chapter is sheer porny hotness. And I greatly approve of the pairing and descriptions there.

Now I'm very happy you came back to this, especially with how you did it. Kinda funny that you brought the idea of Jane Foster with the power of Thor into the modern consciousness before Marvel Comics itself decided to go for it in canon instead of just being a one-off What If? issue. It's like they scour the Internet looking for ideas that they can use, despite all official claims otherwise, as then they'd have to figure out who we are and pay us for using our ideas . . .

I'm digressing, though. Peter and Carol in that gloryhole (only word I really know for that sort of thing, sorry if it's not accurate for this) stall was my favorite part of this chapter, especially with the nods to Carol/Iron Men (she's been shipped with Tony in the past, and #1 of the current --- and concluded --- Captain Marvel volume indicated that she and Rhodey had hooked up) and Carol/Jessica (and even Jessica/Clint, despite not having any real feelings one way or the other about them as a couple), plus the tantalizing possibility of Peter/Jessica in the next chapter. I ought to mention that I'm a big Peter/Darcy shipper, or at least I would be if the Peter that's going to be introduced into the MCU wasn't still in high school, so the short scene with them at the beginning of this chapter was great for me, too.

This has been some on-all-cylinders type of work here, and I'll be looking forward to the next time you update this, as well as any follow-ups you might have in mind for your other great stories.

Wow. This is great.

I want more of this one. It's actually an interesting concept for a universe, and you left us in a great spot for another chapter. Jane was a great choice for Peter's first girl, and I can't wait to see where he goes from there.

I really enjoy your short stories. The world and scenario you described here was fun and kind of hot. I'd be very interested in a deeper delving into this brothel but I'm also glad you just scratched its surface.

Wow that was cool, too bad it wasn't Ms Marvel that Peter was shagging. Oh well hopefully in later chapters keep up the good work.

Damn! That! Was! Awesome! And not just the sexy stuff, you really know how to tell an engaging and funny story, all the little details were just magnificent! All I'll really say is keep doing exactly what you're doing, cause it's really really awesome stuff!

Seriously can't wait for the next chapter!

And thus, Jane Foster is the first one to be done! I like it, it was a very interesting choice and a very uncommon one which makes it all the better. I wonder who is going to end up next. Last thing, while I don't mind if this whole story was Peter banging many woman (I like this part a lot actually), is Peter going to find a serious relationship (I'd like this too).

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Nothing even remotely sexy has happened (I'm waiting for it but I'm patient) but I still love this story (proof being this review, which is the first one ever in this website), the dialogue and character interactions are incredible! Hope to see who Peter gets with later.