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for Paradigm Shift

by AlexPhoenix

person harley
schedule October 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Please please please come back and write more
schedule August 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
To the author: come out come out wherever you are! I am in need of more chapters here! This is a wonderfully written story and I want to see where it goes! So please come out and finish it!
person ArkaadV
schedule March 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooo.....more please! I'm curious as to what the lovely, wiley Loki is up to....
person Daria
schedule December 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and your writing style. Alex's internal dialogue is beautifully done and frequently very funny. Please continue writing, don't make me hunt you down and stab you with a fork, to take a page from Alex's playbook. Oh, I can't tell you how much I grinned over your Tarsier reference!
person Rachael
schedule December 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Brilliantly written story so far. The only story that has managed to make me laugh out loud. Don't stop writing!
schedule November 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I enjoy your character development, Alex is quite fascinating and real-seeming. Also, it's impressive that you can write in first person with such clarity, most people get tripped up by first person. I hope to read more soon.