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Not to criticize you, but a futanari / dickgirl is a woman with a penis where her clitoris would otherwise be. If there's no vagina and a full set of testicles, that's a shemale or transsexual. For what you're going for, Poison should have a vagina as well as a penis. Sometimes, in some art there's a scrotal sac as well with a slit down the middle, but that's much less common and there is still a vagina present.

Yeah, I write futa / hermy characters myself sometimes, so I've done my research. Please accept my comment in the helpful manner it's intended.

I wanna see more.

Damn, I just looked Poison up. How does Peter get all these babes, even if some might be slightly insane? It's not fair!

Anyway, Peter needs to be careful with this shit. He already assured the women that nothing was going on, and at the time, it was true. But they certainly might not think so when they find out about what happened. And they will somehow find out, as women have a knack for finding out our darkest or most embarrassing secrets; it's bloody frustrating. And with many of the women who seem to have their hackles up with this being superheroes, it could make for a rather…unpleasant encounter.

This story is pretty cool! Please don't take a year to update it!

Nice update. Thanks a lot for letting me know about it! It's great that this is a gift for your friend, but please don't take another year to get to the next part *sweatdrop*.

Keep up the great work!

Very nice chapter, I'm looking forward to more.