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March 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I read the new chapter, and re-read it.
It was an overall enjoyable chapter. The inclusion of Kitty is awesome, and Emma's voice continue's to shine through! It's a solid addition, but overall it felt like it lacked a bit in the atmosphere department. It lacked the casual degradation, the subtle details of how Emma keeps people down their knees and wrapped around her toy! I loved when she blew smoke right to Kitty's face, it was completely casual and degrading, just like how she patronized Jean so much and, in the end, had Jean snorting coke and bad-mouthing her own daughter without knowing.
It was a solid chapter, though! I enjoyed it!
On a more personal note, I really did miss Jean. It's one of those things you don't know you want until you are shown, and ever since that Jean chapter I have been visiting the site everyday for an update! Sue's chapters are incredible, but Jean's is something else! Loved it. Do you think there will be more of her?
Regards,
Me!
It was an overall enjoyable chapter. The inclusion of Kitty is awesome, and Emma's voice continue's to shine through! It's a solid addition, but overall it felt like it lacked a bit in the atmosphere department. It lacked the casual degradation, the subtle details of how Emma keeps people down their knees and wrapped around her toy! I loved when she blew smoke right to Kitty's face, it was completely casual and degrading, just like how she patronized Jean so much and, in the end, had Jean snorting coke and bad-mouthing her own daughter without knowing.
It was a solid chapter, though! I enjoyed it!
On a more personal note, I really did miss Jean. It's one of those things you don't know you want until you are shown, and ever since that Jean chapter I have been visiting the site everyday for an update! Sue's chapters are incredible, but Jean's is something else! Loved it. Do you think there will be more of her?
Regards,
Me!
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March 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I came back to show just how much I like this fiction.
There are so many ideas that your writting gives me that I would like to bounce past you, each chapter could be the beginning of a new story in itself!
Continue this as inspiration strikes you, but do continue!
If you need ideas, inspiration, etc, feel free to mail me!
There are so many ideas that your writting gives me that I would like to bounce past you, each chapter could be the beginning of a new story in itself!
Continue this as inspiration strikes you, but do continue!
If you need ideas, inspiration, etc, feel free to mail me!
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February 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow.
This is the best thing I have ever read out of a X-Men erotica.
The writting in itself is incredible, superb, but the situation and the characters, the twists... it's all just too on point to weave into words!
The Rachel thing in the end? Blew my mind! Just the addition of Jean, written as she is, would be enough, but having Rachel there, and Jean realizing her daughter had been properly broken in and sodomized throghouly by Emma? Woah.
11/10, my friend.
Please keep this going!
This is the best thing I have ever read out of a X-Men erotica.
The writting in itself is incredible, superb, but the situation and the characters, the twists... it's all just too on point to weave into words!
The Rachel thing in the end? Blew my mind! Just the addition of Jean, written as she is, would be enough, but having Rachel there, and Jean realizing her daughter had been properly broken in and sodomized throghouly by Emma? Woah.
11/10, my friend.
Please keep this going!
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September 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Just finished the second chapter.
God damn it, man, uncanny! Keep them coming! This is seriously one of the best X-Men stories I have seen so far! Very eager to see Betsy in other situations still, or how other heroes, X-Men, New X-Men place in this.
And of course, how Sue deals with the whole cheating, snorting, getting banged thing with a husband on her bed!
Love the decadence, keep going!
God damn it, man, uncanny! Keep them coming! This is seriously one of the best X-Men stories I have seen so far! Very eager to see Betsy in other situations still, or how other heroes, X-Men, New X-Men place in this.
And of course, how Sue deals with the whole cheating, snorting, getting banged thing with a husband on her bed!
Love the decadence, keep going!
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September 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is just perfect.
The description, the use of secondary characters, the subtle info that makes you wonder about their past experiences, and Emma/Sue's surrender, everything was great.
I would love to see another chapter, either continuing the moment it stopped or having Emma step up with Sue, taking her to other rooms or other nights in her whole thing, watching characters like Betsy fully surrender to their Slut personas, or seeing students like Cessily, Sofia or Laura snorting and going at it.
The description, the use of secondary characters, the subtle info that makes you wonder about their past experiences, and Emma/Sue's surrender, everything was great.
I would love to see another chapter, either continuing the moment it stopped or having Emma step up with Sue, taking her to other rooms or other nights in her whole thing, watching characters like Betsy fully surrender to their Slut personas, or seeing students like Cessily, Sofia or Laura snorting and going at it.
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September 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Amazing.
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September 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Works very well as a one shot and is open enough that you'll have a lot of fans if you decide to take it further.