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May 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Please restart and continue this story, I'd honestly love to read more, would love for there to be something more involving Jean and Rachel, including Scott or Alex. Or perhaps even Valeria's fall into the club only to find herself tangled up with not only her mother but her mother and Franklin (or even better/worse, her mother and Doom).
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November 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Really hope you continue this story.
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May 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Great series. I especially loved the Rachel/Jean stuff and basically everything with Rogue. Seeing the usually modestly dressed voluptuous southern gall passionately slutting it up in front of a crowd was hella sexy.
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April 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Are you by any chance going to add a certain Mary Jane yes or no?
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April 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Haha I knew it was Scott! The ending was great. Hope you write more, maybe with Emma and Scott having sex and forcing Jean to watch.
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April 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great story, I could do without the drug use but to each their own.
I am slightly confused about the Jean chapters, the continuity seems off... perhaps that's just me though, but her first chapter presents her as having been alive for a while and the subsequent chapter makes it seem as though she has just returned and it's her first time to the club.
Otherwise, fantastic story, hope you continue.
I am slightly confused about the Jean chapters, the continuity seems off... perhaps that's just me though, but her first chapter presents her as having been alive for a while and the subsequent chapter makes it seem as though she has just returned and it's her first time to the club.
Otherwise, fantastic story, hope you continue.
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March 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'll be honest: the drug use I'm not fond of...
Everything else though... How do I say it? The scripting of the encounters, the coupling, and the reactions from the written characters have won me over.
“The only way that will happen is if I decide Scott deserves a threesome for our anniversary—and Psylocke is busy.”
Is that a Birthday Bash reference?
LOL Cykes gets referenced a lot so I'm wondering what Emma has in store for him.
Everything else though... How do I say it? The scripting of the encounters, the coupling, and the reactions from the written characters have won me over.
“The only way that will happen is if I decide Scott deserves a threesome for our anniversary—and Psylocke is busy.”
Is that a Birthday Bash reference?
LOL Cykes gets referenced a lot so I'm wondering what Emma has in store for him.
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March 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for the next chapter with Scott!
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March 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Gods!! I've been looking through for Buffy stuff, and the Last Avatar (Toph always Tops) and found this.
Ohhh, GODS!!! Just been reading this over the last day and a half or so. Rubbed two out yesterday, and one this morning after chp 3! And Val, too??? I'm so behind in my comic reading I didn't realize what was meant when you had Rachel `Grey` appear til I read the other posts. Emma needs to see she can only go just so far. Maybe try to get to be more human?
Sue's little trips being what they are are mind-blowing. Try slipping in some others who have broader horizons like Moondragon, or the Dazzler (and broaden hers with maybe Rogue or Mary Jane?). This all started with Sue being bored! so she called some friends... you've alluded to Jan having since that night rimmed her, maybe more than once? With part of chp 2 covering a mission, maybe chp 5 or so does as well, with some girls having an afternoon by the Avengers pool, or with a Hurricane blowing through the Carib. some of these beauties lay about St. Thomas or the like after a bit of HEROing... and when the Sun sets };->
Hey, this Maylasia 370 thing, maybe a couple of girls come across Sharon Carter (worldly woman that she is) "over" the Indian Ocean and fun breaks out. Mile-high club anyone?
Now for other stuff. This is Hot, bbuuutt there was several spelling mistakes in chp 4. I agree with another post`er in that #4 "felt" off. But still, PLEASE keep posting to this thing
I had to look back and read what I posted for some other Marvel fictions here on AFF, and what get me is the 'time'. I found them back in '05' (or earlier) and a couple are still being posted (well, as of a couple years ago), and its interesting how with of Comics, now the Movies, and the HUB ("X-Men: Evolution", "The Avengers: Earth's Mightiest Heroes!" and "Wolverine and the X-Men") we can enjoy characters we've grown up with down the decades and find new things to amaze us.
Ohhh, GODS!!! Just been reading this over the last day and a half or so. Rubbed two out yesterday, and one this morning after chp 3! And Val, too??? I'm so behind in my comic reading I didn't realize what was meant when you had Rachel `Grey` appear til I read the other posts. Emma needs to see she can only go just so far. Maybe try to get to be more human?
Sue's little trips being what they are are mind-blowing. Try slipping in some others who have broader horizons like Moondragon, or the Dazzler (and broaden hers with maybe Rogue or Mary Jane?). This all started with Sue being bored! so she called some friends... you've alluded to Jan having since that night rimmed her, maybe more than once? With part of chp 2 covering a mission, maybe chp 5 or so does as well, with some girls having an afternoon by the Avengers pool, or with a Hurricane blowing through the Carib. some of these beauties lay about St. Thomas or the like after a bit of HEROing... and when the Sun sets };->
Hey, this Maylasia 370 thing, maybe a couple of girls come across Sharon Carter (worldly woman that she is) "over" the Indian Ocean and fun breaks out. Mile-high club anyone?
Now for other stuff. This is Hot, bbuuutt there was several spelling mistakes in chp 4. I agree with another post`er in that #4 "felt" off. But still, PLEASE keep posting to this thing
I had to look back and read what I posted for some other Marvel fictions here on AFF, and what get me is the 'time'. I found them back in '05' (or earlier) and a couple are still being posted (well, as of a couple years ago), and its interesting how with of Comics, now the Movies, and the HUB ("X-Men: Evolution", "The Avengers: Earth's Mightiest Heroes!" and "Wolverine and the X-Men") we can enjoy characters we've grown up with down the decades and find new things to amaze us.
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March 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This story has been a hell of a ride from beginning to present, and I say present because I know you're not done yet, not with so much more blissful and ecstatic degradation for Emma to sensually inflict upon the many ladies of Marvel. The third chapter was something else, though, with not just two redheads for the price of one, but two redheads that are cross-temporally mother and daughter. Then again, with how obsessed Rachel used to be with getting Jean to accept her as her daughter and changed her name from Summers to Grey when she found out her father had been cheating on Jean with Emma, this is perhaps something I should've seen coming down the line. Oh, and for added cross-temporal mother-daughter incestuous goodness, now you've got Valeria Von Doom watching the painful pleasures and pleasurable degradations being visited upon Sue Storm while receiving a somewhat rude awakening to her own sexuality. What a ride, what a ride . . . and it's not over yet, is it?