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They made three big mistakes here they really shouldn't have with Peter:

1.- They have gone too far with their games.
2.- they pissed him off, as nothing is scarier than an angry Spider-man who is smarter and craftier than they think.
3.- They left the handcuffs, they will regret that later on.

Is the final chapter coming or will it go payback on Carol, then Jess and finally together?

Will you do anything more Spider related stories? I was thinking you can do one with him, Silver Sable and Natasha, sort of an AU where they save the world, Silver is with them and feelings bloom between the three do to their experience together.

Hope to see his payback soon, Peace!

I hope that's the last of the teasing because this is starting to get a bit boring, if you have to do one more before we get any actual sex then I say this time have Peter turn the tables on them and he gets off while they are left frustrated which could lead into some actual sex scenes because honestly after that any man would tell them to get lost as you can only tease someone so far.

Love your work. Jessica is one of my favorite superheroines. You write well and carry the themes of selfishness and power play very well. I hope for more, and while Peter isn't known for being the coolest head around women I'd like to see some justice for him. Wherever you decide to take this, I look forward to reading it.

I really hope this doesn't end with them just using him that way and expecting him to keep taking it. I mean I don't him to force them and everything but I mean come on, he is one of the most loveable guys they will ever find and messing with him like that is just so cruel.

Interesting story. For the record, Peter has known Carol since she began her career (prior to her joining the Avengers) so he saw version 2 of the original costume (belly covered).

Really liking it so far and definitely looking forward to the next chapter. Love this pairing, keep it up.

I like it. Though I feel Carol seems a little out of character in her surprise of Peter's erection. But the end result of Peter overthinking it and Carol using his discomfort and her arousal to her own pleasure works well.

Nice new story you got going here. I have a soft spot for Miss Marvel and Spider-Man. That's a pairing that Marvel has hinted at in the past, but never truly explored. You've definitely established some sexual tension here. But they didn't jump right into it. So there's room to explore. And I like the concept of Carol being turned on by dominating him. Peter always has been somewhat whipped by women like Black Cat. I think it makes sense for someone like Miss Marvel to exploit it. lol You've always written solid stories and this looks to be another good addition. I look forward to seeing the next chapter and keep up the good work.

MarvelMaster616