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An excellent end to a very good story. I especially liked the ending because even if Peter has every intention of coming back to Jess and Carol, the Parker luck could easily lead him into a distracting fight with Mysterio. That is how I course to imagine the fallout anyways.

The only constructive points I have to mention are the plethora of what look like auto correct mishaps. A beta editor would easily clean those up.

It was a wonderful contribution. Thanks for sharing.

Another Awesome chapter. Hope he gets them back for what they did to him

Awesome payback. What a cliff hanger. Anyway another awesome chapter Keep up the awesome work.

A little revenge that leaves Spidey unprepared for the consequencesthe of his actions. Or maybe he's completely prepared, both would be great and in character. Spider's taunts in the boardroom are not subtle, I'd expect Tony to have caught it, maybe not the details but the situation.

Another sweet instalment, I look forward to the finale.

They have no right to take umbrage, as they did precisely the same thing to Peter: Tease him relentlessly, only to stop at the worst possible moment, leaving him high and dry. What's good for the goose is good for the gander. Maybe next time when they get the itch to fuck around with the mind and body of one of the world's most intelligent beings, they'll choose to just let things be.

Question, how did he get rid of the handcuffs? And does he still have them to use on the two?

Carol and Jess really have no leg to stand on, they brought this on themselves and deserve the payback, wonder if they will own up to what they owe him.

Also got a pair of challenges for you.

Think you can do something where Peter hooks up with Silver Sable and Black Widow after the arc where Otto nearly destroyed the plannet?

Also think you can make something After Superior where he gets his body back but no one trust him but gets help from Wanda Maximoff as a person who knows what he is going through?

Love the payback, hope to see the finally soon.

Been enjoying this story so far mostly for one reason, and one reason that has come into stark focus with this latest chapter.

Spider-Man's epic revenge upon Carol and Jessica for fucking with his head like that. I wonder what you have in mind, though I would kindly suggest that he give them a dose of their own medicine --- tie them up with super-durable webbing (he can modify his web formula for that) and then tease them to the breaking point before leaving them to stew in their own unfulfilled arousal. That would be the best kind of revenge, and hell, they had no problem doing it to him, so . . .

OK, now they've simply gone too far. A little teasing is fine, even hot. But this time, they crossed the line. Using adamantium cuffs and leaving him there, with not even his ankles uncuffed? That's just asking to piss someone off. And being that he can lift several tons, and is also one of the smartest people on the planet, he can be quite creative with his revenge. Control is one thing, but they essentially doomed any chance they may have had at a relationship of any kind with him. They'd be lucky if all he did was tell them to fuck off.

Also, it's incredibly presumptuous of them to think that this can continue, especially when they laughed when they had the sheer gall to make that forgiveness crack.

I can't wait to see how Peter will get revenge!

Don't leave us hanging! LOL it was good, all 3 chapters are, but I'm starting to feel like Peter does.

Please Chapter 4 posthaste.