rate_review Reviews

5/5 because reading an extension of that hilarious scene from the comic is incredibly rewarding.

Good scripting of the "action". Looking forward to the threesome chapter.

For the first chapter I really enjoyed it, I liked the set up with a good explanation as to why she was doing this as well as Reed's thoughts on things as he most likely would be questioning things after what Sue did by kissing Namor like that. And I thought the reflections were pretty good, I also enjoyed how you used Reed's powers in this in very inventive ways something I haven't seen too often. Although I'm surprised Reed didn't notice the tattoo on her unless he had already seen it but still I can't wait for the next chapter when you get around to it.