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for Team Unity

by MarvelFan98

person Royboy
schedule July 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Awesome. Awesome, awesome, AWESOME. One of your best stories yet, man. Hot work!
person JViper
schedule July 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
If every team did exercise this to build up teamwork I doubt there would be any betrayals. Kidding aside I really liked the story. Somehow this team members are certainly not the easiest to work on. I haven't been reading on Avengers in a while but this team screams internal fights and bickerings, glad they can work towards something together even if Janet has to be the target. BTW that finale was awesome. I was expecting an orgy with the fic's title being team unity but not bukkake. Color me surprised. Great work as always!
schedule July 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Another great one-shot, my friend! I really enjoyed this and I think it's actually a good idea for the current state in Uncanny Avengers. lol They really don't get along and are always at each others' throats. There's a lot of tension to go around and what better way to ease that tension with a good old fashioned orgy? lol It makes a twisted bit of sense and that's part of what makes your stories so enjoyable. Like all your previous stories, this one was nicely detailed with a nice variety of sex acts. Rogue encouraging Wanda and Janet to try anal was a nice touch. I imagine that after being with Remy, she would be a bit more kinky than other women. lol This was a very enjoyable story and I encourage you to keep writing! I eagerly await whatever kinky idea you come up with next.

Regards,
MarvelMaster616
person Harbinger of Kaos
schedule July 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well that's one way to get the team more united ;).

Ever think about doing anything like your Voyeur series but only with Spidey (Peter Parker not that fat ass body stealer) and different girl? Could be just Marvel or a mixture of both Marvel & DC. Just asking out of curiosity and because of recent events that just show how uncared for he is, Peace!