rate_review Reviews

Oh sweet delicious vanilla how I missed you. Bad joke apart, I really digged this story. I remember not being too fond of Whedon's run. Too much character drama and too little plot. But I do admit either in the books and here, Kitty phasing out is still funny. Wolverine's reaction is also priceless.
Sometimes sweet love in the missionary position for the sole purpose of procreation makes for the best stories. It felt great to see both saying the 3 words out loud after such activity. And really Colossus and Kitty is one of the couples that look really taboo with her being so tiny and al. Makes for some really hot sex it seems, judging by this story.
Great work all around. I just wish AFF would implement a notification system. I almost didn't catch this gem.

Nice one-shot, my friend! I really enjoyed it. A much more detailed and entertaining look at that scene in Astonishing X-men. It seems so long ago that Colossus and Kitty actually shared this kind of passion. You really captured it nicely with your usual attention to detail and well-thought out scene. You even threw in that little tidbit where Kitty phased through the floor and wound up on the lower levels. lol That was a nice touch and a nice little homage to the comics. I really enjoy your work and I hope you continue to do more. And thanks again for all your support on my works as well! Until next time, take care and best wishes.

MarvelMaster616

I thought this was very well done. Great scene, perfectly set within the comic; I remembered the scene of Kitty going to Piotr's door but totally forgot about her phasing through the ceiling. Great Work. Any chance you'll do a Betsy/Warren story at some point?