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I definitely like the latest chapter you've posted. I like the situation that you put Carol and Peter in and how it went from there. I also like how Aphrodite was enjoying the whole situation from afar while enjoying from pleasure for herself. Overall, I like how this story is progressing and I can't wait to see who Peter becomes involved with next. Though you've hinted it's a mutant, the list of women that would go great with Peter, just on mutants alone, the mind just wonders who it will be. I know you may not think it's possible but I would like to se X-23 be with Peter, not in a serious relationship but uses Peter as an outlet from time to time.

Overall, can't wait to see what you've got planned next for this story.

I'm liking this story more and more. Maybe it's because you're one of the few writers to write Carol/peter and I have a soft spot for them. But the quality of all the chapters is undeniable and each girl gets the spotlight just right. I can't wait to see who else is gonna feature. Keep it up the great work.

Great chapter, my friend. You're probably the only one who incorporates Miss Marvel into stories like this and does it in a way that makes sense. lol It seems from this chapter that the spell Aphrodite put on Peter is getting stronger. Miss Marvel clearly couldn't explain why she was so turned on, but she didn't seem to care and neither did Peter. But it's getting to the point where they're clearly noticing. It's always fun to add a nice shower scene into the mix. It can be awkward, funny, and steamy in all the right ways. lol I like that you switched it up to the bed as well. It is kind of strange that Peter hasn't been with a woman who has superpowers. With his strength, I can't help but wonder if holding back is really frustrating to him. But he didn't have to hold back with Miss Marvel and it showed. Another great job, my friend! Keep up the excellent work. I'm looking forward to the next issue, which I assume is Rogue. That should be a lot of fun! Take care, my friend.

MarvelMaster616

Ok so I read through the forum story discussion topic...

What about Firestar? I believe she broke up with Justice before One more Day, plus she's a Spider Friend.

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One way to work Jessica Drew into the story is right after Ms Marvel since they are friends (Spider-Woman saved Ms Marvel when she had her powers siphoned off by Rogue). I can't remember the specifics but they were roomies at one point... Just imagine the possibilities.

As for villainesses/female villains, this is tougher since they aren't as famous as the dudes in Spidey's rogue gallery. So maybe you could work it so that Aphrodite sees it as a personal challenge i.e. turning hatred into attraction to balance the scales. Also, Aphrodite can be quite vindictive when she feels slighted or feels jealous of mortals and she resorts to humbling/shaming them like with Pasiphae & The White Bull.
Suggestions:
- Lady Octopus/Carolyn Trainer
- Stunner
- Titania (during the Secret Wars, she gets humbled by Spider-Man, and has been wary of him ever since)
- Superia -- not an actual Spidey villain but she's a well-known hater of males, has been known to hire female villains as part of her Femizons, and is arrogant

Good start hope to see Aphrodite again at some point instead of this been a one time fling

Good chapter, hope you can work Laura in there at some point.

Great story so far can´t wait to see who is next and if he will start to get suspicios of something strange going on with him soon. Also I would like to see him with Spider-woman too.

Third chapter was asstounding! Really enjoyed it.

I think this set-up with Aphrodite contriving to have Peter have these encounters with women he knows works wonders for a character like Spider-Man. I can't wait to see Silver Sable and Ms Marvel soon get in the action since you've handled them well in your past fics.

A few requests:
1. While it would be amazing to have Julia Carpenter (current Madame Web) be added, it would be plain spectacular if you can have a chapter with her and Jessica Drew (Spider-Woman) having a threesome with Peter.

2. Storm recently reverted to single status and last I saw her she was with Psylocke as part of a new X-Force team. Storm + Psylocke = sexy situation.

3. Invisible Woman

This scenes with Black Cat and Spider-Man. I laughed a bit at the part where the two entered at the hotel and gave their "names" to the front desk clerk. Especially with her response to it.

So, we got a little more insight into the spell that the Love Goddess placed on Peter Parker. Pretty much anyone that Peter has an attraction to or any woman might have an attraction to Peter, whatever inhibitions either might have is instantly torn down and both enjoy the pleasures. With Aphrodite, it makes sense what kind of love spell it would be. Now, the one question I have is kinda like a flip one. We know the women Peter will be with are overall 'good guys', so what about the girls on the other side of the specrtum? To be clear, I'm not talking about reformed 'bad guys', I'm talking about those that are still criminals and have not really shown to be anything but 'bad guys' There are few that could probably fit the bill but that would be like a side idea.

Honeslty, I would like to see that sort of a twist, like the love spell covers all kinds of love, including dark love and such.

Keep up the work and I hope to see more of this and other stories you have in the works.

You always capture the best and most provocative parts of Black Cat's sexuality and this chapter once again showed why she's so damn hot. lol She definitely comes off as more adventurous and decadent than others like Mary Jane. Her love of anal sex seems to show that, not to mention her choice of attire. lol I like how you referenced that one hook-up they had in the comics a while back. That seems to be the extent of their relationship, hooking up and hot sex. But under Aphrodite's influence, I think it works perfectly well. lol And nice touch there with the hotel scene and the cos-playing convention. That was a nice bit of humor. lol Overall, I really enjoyed this every bit as much as the previous chapter. But I can't help but wonder how much longer Aphrodite will be content just watching. She's clearly affecting Peter. It's showing in his sexual stamina. How much further can that go? I think the women will have a tough time handling him at the rate he's going. lol But then again, maybe that's the point. Keep up the good work my friend!