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Well Anya is in for something all right, hope if you start the group thing we get to see Carol and Rogue first as that one will be explosive to say the least! Though I wonder who would be kinkier in a threeway, Jess, Jen or Felicia?

Good like always, but I really want to see him with Aphrodite again and to see her tell him what´s going on exactly.

Can't really see this happening in the mainstream comics but I'm more than sure, and along with other readers of this story and comic viewers, have wondered what it would be like if these two characters ever got together. Bit of a stretch but Aphrodite's spell easily works in Peter's favor in this case. There's definitely going to be some kind of a fallout with Peter having taken a teenager to bed. I did like the part where her Spanish heritage did come to the surface, definitely sets the mood of what this character was feeling and that Peter is pretty much, to coin a phrase, dating the rainbow.

I bet a lot of readers are going to be wondering what Mary Jane will do knowing that Peter is having an open relationship with Jen. I like the part where she finds out but initially thinks Peter is into big women since the bra size alone hints at it. Then again, She-Hulk is a big woman but the right kind of bigness. If Tony Stark ever gets wind of Peter's luck with all these women, I can see him asking for some dating tips from Peter.

By the way, I've been wondering about Emma Frost and how she can be added. Before the story arc Fear Itself and Curse of the Mutants (the story arc that dealt with vampires attacking the X-Men back in 2011 which had Jubilee becoming a vampire herself), there was a story arc called Serve and Protect where Logan, Gambit, Storm, and Emma were searching for missing people who were disappearing into the sewers. That team ran into both Spider-Man's villain the Lizard and the X-Men's villain Dark Beast who was experimenting on the Lizard to make others like him but obedient. For a while, only Emma and Spider-Man were left from not being turned into mindless attacking lizards. Eventually the good guys win and everyone is changed back to normal.

You could use this situation into creating an opening for Emma and Peter to get together. If there are those that say it won't work between Emma and Peter, the woman showed no real love for Scott Summers, Cyclops, no matter what she had said before because during the Avengers vs. X-Men arc, Emma went behind Scott's back and had an affair with Namor to which she revealed it to Scott just before the final fight.

With the history that Emma has, maybe Peter can actually be the one person she's always been looking for as a stone that she can rely on. Plus her mental powers in the harem would definitely make for some interesting interactions between the girls and Peter.

Just some food for thought and this still was an excellent latest update for this story.

Another fun, entertaining chapter with plenty of enjoyable moments. Once again, you find a way to mix things up with these scenes. You've had Peter hook up with all these sex, experienced female characters. Now he hooks up with someone who is a virgin. Something about that seems fitting. lol He's kind of experienced the entire spectrum here. I thought you did a nice job detailing just how different it is with a virgin. I think you were pretty realistic with Anya, right up to throwing in those Spanish phrases. lol That was a nice touch. I can see a girl in her position getting pretty excited. In this case Peter had to really take the lead here, which is kind of a change of pace compared to the She-Hulks and Black Cats of the world. I think it's good for him in that it gives him some balance. He can't always rely on the women in his life to be so firmly in control. lol

Interesting scene at the beginning too. Mary Jane finding out about She-Hulk certainly raises a few questions. Does that mean you'll start mixing in a few three-ways in the future? I think that could definitely be interesting. Either way, keep up the great work my friend. Take care!

MarvelMaster616

I've been really enjoying this story. I think in an earlier chapter you mentioned wanting to work Emma or someone in. Maybe there could be an incident when he wants in on a X-Couple and is just invited to join in (like Emma and Scott or Betsy and Warren).

if thouse two started living to gether as in spider-man and spider woman i say they would screw in a mattress into the roof. or just go spider themed with a massive rooms sized hamick

Another fun chapter that offered some nice insight into a character that doesn't get enough of it (in more ways than one). Love what you did with Jessica here, playing up all the mistrust she has to deal with. It's something I think gets overlooked. We've never really seen her deal with it and I think you handled it nicely here. I also like how you found a way to squeeze in a cameo for Aphrodite. That was a nice touch. So was a quickie in the elevator. lol Jessica doesn't seem all that big on foreplay. She likes to get down to business. I can see that totally working for her. I can also see her having a few unique tastes, like oral. You've done a good job giving every female character little quirks like that. It makes each chapter feel unique and enjoyable. It also makes each chapter worth waiting for. Another winner here, my friend! Keep up the awesome work.

MarvelMaster616

Ah, interesting and unique way for two spider-powered heroes to get together. I definitely like the part where you kept it real about the part where most people who screw on carpeted floors tend to get some rug burn because of their actions. Get 'heated up' in more ways than just one.

Cool way to have Aphrodite move things along and I love the reaction Jessica had with her subtle words. Nice internal debate between Jessica's logical and instinctual self at the bar scene. Though it's a first time between the two, a good way to have elevator sex but I thought whenever the emergency button is pushed, an alarm goes off. In a way, Jessica guaranteed that someone was going to see her and Peter going at in the elevator if an alarm was triggered.

Can't wait to see what else you've got cooked up and who "The Virgin" will be.

Is "The Virgin" Anya Spidergirl Corazón like you mention in Julia's chapter?

Another quality chapter, my friend. Julia never struck me as being overly repressed, but she was definitely reserved. I think you brought that out in just the right ways. Her sensing Peter's activities with all the other women seemed to send her over the edge. lol But does that mean she can also sense Aphrodite's activities? Can she pick up on the spell she cast over him? I'd like to see that revisited at some point since you say Jessica Drew is going to be last. I like how you had Julia notice all the different peculiarities with the other women. That's the kind of detail I don't usually see in these fics and I applaud you for it. I like how you got a little creative with the positions, but I would have liked to see her put those psychic powers of hers to good use. Maybe that's something you can squeeze in later. Looking forward to seeing how you bring it all together in the end. Keep up the awesome work, my friend! This was another enjoyable read.

MarvelMaster616