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January 7, 2017 at 12:00 AM
Why is the punctuation so bad?
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October 25, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Is too much to hope for that this story isn't abandoned. I would really like to see this continue. Every chapter is great, well paced and structured, real talent on display here.
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February 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I SO WANNA SEE SPIDEY FUCK SQUIRELL GIRL I HAVE A THING ABOUT TAILS
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January 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter please continue soon.
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January 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, man. Definitely one of the best to date. And you even found some time to throw in a quick Spanish lesson. lol So it's sexy AND educational? That's a strange combination, but you made it work. The beginning was really fun, a nice sexy dream full of all the women Peter had hooked up with. It was a little rushed, but at the very least it provided a nice assessment of what had transpired and who he had been with. Sometimes it's hard to keep track so a nice reminder helps. Also, the chat with Anya was very believable. Being so young, I can see her wanting more than just a one night stand for her first time. I think it would've been too much to just have them write it off. So good job with that.
But the development with Mary Jane is interesting. I've been waiting for Aphrodite to make another move like this. I think this is a good way to get her involved again, using Mary Jane to set things into motion. I'm not sure if it was your intent, but was that dream part of her plan too? If so, Mary Jane definitely has the skills and charisma to get the job done so to speak. lol
Again, great job. Definitely one of your best chapters in this story to date. Keep up the great work, my friend!
MarvelMaster616
But the development with Mary Jane is interesting. I've been waiting for Aphrodite to make another move like this. I think this is a good way to get her involved again, using Mary Jane to set things into motion. I'm not sure if it was your intent, but was that dream part of her plan too? If so, Mary Jane definitely has the skills and charisma to get the job done so to speak. lol
Again, great job. Definitely one of your best chapters in this story to date. Keep up the great work, my friend!
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January 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, another interesting visit from Peter's divine benefactor yields yet another gift, will she visit all of the ladies to expand their horizon's?
Also the next chapter is titled Party girls, that tells me the ladies involved could be a combination of MJ, Felicia and Jen since they fit with that description more than the others ladies. Though I think that an encounter between Him, MJ and Felicia is all are expecting I hope you have Peter and MJ spend the night with Jen since that is the woman MJ was most worried about. Either way it was a nice addition to the series and I hope you update it sooner so we can see who the ladies are to be the first to experience his enhancements.
Also the next chapter is titled Party girls, that tells me the ladies involved could be a combination of MJ, Felicia and Jen since they fit with that description more than the others ladies. Though I think that an encounter between Him, MJ and Felicia is all are expecting I hope you have Peter and MJ spend the night with Jen since that is the woman MJ was most worried about. Either way it was a nice addition to the series and I hope you update it sooner so we can see who the ladies are to be the first to experience his enhancements.
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January 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Very nice in adding the strong possibility of Peter finally having more than one of the girls he's seeing at a time. The mental image of the girls that Peter has already screwed now into threesome and moresome with the other girls definitely is something Marvel Comics should do. A nice addition to what happened the following morning with Peter and Anya. It does have the possibility of it might coming back to bite either Anya or Peter or with his luck, bite both of their asses. That's one part and the other part, getting MJ into some more than just the male/female aspect of sex was a solid addition to the story. Never figured MJ being interested in the same sex but with Aphrodite being the teacher, there are going to be some lesson that she will learn and wonder why she didn't learn them sooner.
I hope to see what you've got planned now that Aphrodite seems to have given Peter an upgrade in his stamina. With all the women he has now inducted into his little harem, he's definitely going to need the extra boost.
I hope to see what you've got planned now that Aphrodite seems to have given Peter an upgrade in his stamina. With all the women he has now inducted into his little harem, he's definitely going to need the extra boost.
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November 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
White Tiger (Ava Ayala) or Valkeryie would be nice choices. Perhaps a villainess? So many to chose from in that pot. I look forward to the next update.
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November 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Please make a Peter/Sue Storm chapter. I know she's married but it would be awesome! AlsoPeter/Jean, and Peter/Natasha.
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November 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
How about adding a villainess to Spidey's Harem? Cause' y'know Black Cat's really more of an anti-heroine or anti-villainess rather than a full-fledged one. Someone like maybe Thundra or Menace, or Titania (if you don't like her husband the Absorbing Man) or something.
And what about Black Widow? I'd thought that there would be at least one chapter about her.
As for story ideas, hmm. How about a battle and or bet between the love goddess Aphrodite and the dark demoness Umar? Or maybe the Enchantress or some other evil lust goddes/cosmic entity. Like to decide which is more powerful between love and lust, or whether the villainess can corrupt Peter (and the girls) into thinking nothing except sex and depravity, or which can get Spider-Man on their side or something.
That's all I've got for now. Anyway, good chapter and sex scene, especially liked the part with MJ being jealous of She-Hulk by the way, and can't wait for more.
And what about Black Widow? I'd thought that there would be at least one chapter about her.
As for story ideas, hmm. How about a battle and or bet between the love goddess Aphrodite and the dark demoness Umar? Or maybe the Enchantress or some other evil lust goddes/cosmic entity. Like to decide which is more powerful between love and lust, or whether the villainess can corrupt Peter (and the girls) into thinking nothing except sex and depravity, or which can get Spider-Man on their side or something.
That's all I've got for now. Anyway, good chapter and sex scene, especially liked the part with MJ being jealous of She-Hulk by the way, and can't wait for more.