rate_review Reviews

I love this story so far, the characterizations are great and I love that Harry is only twenty and a normal wizard since it seems every crossover makes him all powerful master of death and hundreds of years old which I don't really like. I can't wait to see what the Avengers think of Harry as they start to get to know him and the developing relationship between Harry and Clint. Is it going to just be Harry/Clint or are you going to bring a Beta into the relationship at some point? I hope Tony finds video of Harry being tortured so there can be no question of the fact that Harry didn't tell them anything. Thanks for the story, looking forward to the next chapter.

This story is really interesting. I like it. :3 can't wait to read more (well I can but you know what I ment XD)

dame poor harry i hope they can get ready of the new scars and harry will be a dad and poor clint had to rape him so sad i hope that the agent that did it to harry dies painfully yeah and clint alpha the fun part is that harry will be in heat and only clint will beable to help

Poor Harry. Are all the Avengers alphas and betas? Great story.

Really good I enjoyed it

It's an awesome story, I'm just glad that Harry wasn't raped by someone that wouldn't have uphold responsibilities for it because I know that Clint would take responsiblities, and yea rape isn't good but it was something that could't be stopped because of Harry's heat and at least it was Clint and not some nameless torturer and clint will take care of Harry, I can't wait to see the next chapter, this story is epic, i gotta say it's one of my top favorites.

Wow, just wow. I could see that chapter so clearly. The muse has definately blessed you this time :) Can't wait to see what happens next.

this is the parts that make me so sad and want to kill his boss

Well, strictly it wasn't his attention it required, but his superior’s, It was hard not having any real human contact and he was lonely wanted human contact, preferably from an Alpha, but a Beta would do, hell even another Omega would do, he just wanted someone to talk to, someone to touch, it didn't have to be sexual.so he had curled up under his jacket, under his desk and not for the first time either.
this is the parts that make me so sad and want to kill his boss. i hope they they take care of harry

It wasn't Clint's fault. He was basically in an animal state of mind once Harry's heat scent hit him. There was no way for him to know Harry was in his heat, since the kidnappers had a good air exchange going on. Hopefully someone gets it through his guilty conscience. And hopefully Harry will have a good head about it. Can't wait for your next update!

Wonderful! But poor Harry. I wonder if this Agent Nasri is responsible somehow for what happened to Harry, or just a craptastic coincidence. The scene at the end just grabs you, and makes you sad that the next chapter hasn't been uploaded yet.

Sorry for not signing in, AFF is being a bit of a dick to me. It won't accept my log in.