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I love so far... just as good as the rise of....... why not owl st. mungo's? is Hedwig still alive? and didn't Clint get shot 6 times in ch 2? 4 were through and through's.... 2 got stuck in bone... that totals 6. what about the fight that killed Voldemort? and when will harry find out he is pregnant? can harry attack Clint when he finds out... like through a hex or prank him good? please that would be a hoot. how do you pronounce the name of your holiday? welsh has some interesting tricks for spelling.

This was a great chapter. I loved Tony's explanation for why he acts differently then the other Alpha's. That cliff hanger was evil the suspense is killing me as to whether Harry is going to flip out and demand an explanation or if he's going to try to hide the fact he knows which would give Clint the chance to come clean which will hopefully make it easier for Harry to come to terms with what happened and accept Clint and the other Avengers being a part of his life. I can't picture Harry holding what happened against Clint either way but it will take a much longer and harder time for Harry to accept what happened and trust Clint and the Avengers if he thinks they were trying to hide it from him. Anyway I absolutely love this story and hope it turns into a very, very long epic story. I know you already have other stories going but I hope you won't cut this short, even if we have to wait a long time between updates being able to read the characters relationships and storyline fully develop is more than worth the wait.

Oh Star what a place to leave us at!! I thought Clint's room might be closer to Harry's but now I can see that would be a problem for the Avenger bunch as they don't know what will happen when Harry is told. I can't wait to see how Harry starts to manage the group. Will they find out about his magic before Fury does?

poor harry hate the cliffy he now knows clint fuck him and that he might be pregnant knowing harry he might think clint doesn't want him love this

So good, really loving this story, I particularly love the balance between Harry being fiery and stubborn whilst still being kind of cute.
Flowed beautifully and was an easy read but progressed the story along. looking forward to more. :)

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so far i am liking the story. can an alpha male mate an alpha female? do alpha females exist? are there any omega females or all of them males? can the cornered omega be harry fighting voldermort and winning killing him? can harry form a telepathic link with agent barton so in his sleep he can help form a bond with the father of his child, and maybe ease the guilt the other feels... and maybe can barton court him in the story? prove to harry he can provide for both him and the child? as the author these are decisions left to you... i just thought you would appreciate sujestions... just like in rise of the drakens... which is another story i absolutely love.

i so want tony to find the tape were harry is being torture so they can prove that he didn't tell them anything that would be awesome poor clint i hope harry is having a baby and that he soothes clint heart

I'm glad to see Harry is awake, I'm curious how he'll react to being mated to Clint o:

Thanks this was really good