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Great Chapter; glad to see you have not made Harry overly forgiving, not that I thought you would. :)
Loved the kitchen scene, thought it was really cute, great to see the dynamic between them all as a group and a bit of Clint's jealousy. Also yay for protective angry Pepper. :)

yea, favorite kind of fandom = 3=

thogh times ahead for Clint...lol
tnk u for the update

lovely as always star thanks and keep being your brillant self

I am quite confused and have just one question, is the alpha/beta/omega thing from a fandom or made up?

The Avenger's are going to have some major ass kissing to do to get back on Harry's good side. I somehow doubt they have ever dealt with an omega like Harry before. It will be interesting to see how they deal with a Harry that is independent and not just going to do as he's told since they really only know Harry through the video footage of him at the office which makes him appear to be very submissive and obedient and the footage of his capture. So despite the limited time they spent with him in the hospital it wouldn't be unexpected that they are probably expecting him to be submissive and obedient with them the same as he was at work. In which case, boy aren't they in for a rude awakening! Looking forward to the next chapter.

Really cool crossover. I like it!
I think if I was Harry, I'd say screw this job - first, he's being exploited by his superior (and I don't think anyone told him yet that the jerk was punished for it), now everyone is lying to him, from the lowest nurse up to the boss of the organization. That's gotta suck. I'm pretty glad I'm neither as overworked as your Harry, nor in any other way in a similar situation, but I imagine my reaction would have been something like run to the top of the tower, get out my Firebold and leave. If Europe and the US didn't work out, maybe Asia will be nice that time of year...?
Looking forward to more!
- Dime

in a weird way I kind of like the sheepish cowardly way clint went about letting harry know about the mating. harry showed all of the alphas that he would not take anything lying down, especially if it involved him. let's face it harry is more stubborn then a terrier after something. will you include harry's parseltounge ability? and maybe kick clint for being a coward? and thank you for letting me know how to pronounce the name of the holiday.

so its official. after finally getting time to read up on lycanthrope factory i finally had time to read this and have decided that you are officially one of the best of not the best fanfiction writer i have had the privelage to follow.
thank you for your hard work !!!
dwood
your fics are a-maz-ing!! :)

Hot dame harry knows now i so hope that he gives them all hell and that they suffer just a little except for maybe tony and pepper and bruce was just listen to steve so want more love this really good