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August 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
On re-reading, I still love the Muffin Man best. ^^
I don't understand, though, how anything Harry remembers about his kidnapping could possibly be important news - like the name Koli or the fact that superiors were mentioned. Didn't everyone already watch the video footage? Was there no sound on the tape?
- Dime
I don't understand, though, how anything Harry remembers about his kidnapping could possibly be important news - like the name Koli or the fact that superiors were mentioned. Didn't everyone already watch the video footage? Was there no sound on the tape?
- Dime
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June 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Not many more chapters? Aw, no! I still want to see Harry mess up and display his magic to the Avengers. *pouts*
*g* But it's your story, and if that's not a part of it, so be it. Either way, I'll enjoy reading the next chapter - whenever you get around to it. ^^
- Dime
*g* But it's your story, and if that's not a part of it, so be it. Either way, I'll enjoy reading the next chapter - whenever you get around to it. ^^
- Dime
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June 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hello Star, let me start by apologizing first because my spelling is bad, and I am writing this review from my phone. Now that thats out of the way I wanted to tell you how much I enjoy your writing. When you first started this story I was not intersted, only because I hate reading WIPs. Then as I sat at home one day it hit me that this is being writen by Star, so I have to read it. LOL. I tend to like harry with tony, but you have me cheering on clint. I love how detailed your reserch is, by giving the ages of the charaters. I keep waiting for the next chapter as egerly as I do all your stories. I also love how you keep the charaters true to their cannon personalities. You are an amazing srory teller, and I just want to encorage you to keep up the fantastic job.
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June 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Why does Halloween always have to be a bit of crappy for Harry? :( Still, we got a shopping trip with baby-things in the purchase order! That was nice. And it was a kick to get everyone's ages... Is it bad that I want to snicker at the fact Harry's, like, half everyone's age? It's like, cradle-robbing or something! Ha!
Not sure if I'm more annoyed at Barton making a slow move or Harry being too quick to dart. I really wanted that kiss! Ah, well. If the character's not ready for it, the character's not ready. I can still pout. It's neat to watch Barton come to terms with the idea that he's falling for someone and might possibly have a future, a family, with someone. He does work better with explicit orders, though, doesn't he?
I love Bruce--I blame the Avengers movie. Took my dad to see IM3 and made him wait to very, very end just because I think he's a doll.
And those two Alphas--wth! I almost cant believe Tony would allow scum like that into his place! They need an extra a**-kicking!
Hmmm... but does Harry know more than Harry realizes, or is the attempts on his life really just a matter of pride now?
I understand priority fics, and I am hankering and chomping for more Drackens (and maybe even a little more LF), but I do hope this muse revisits more often. Especially since you hinted its somewhat-near a conclusion!
Not sure if I'm more annoyed at Barton making a slow move or Harry being too quick to dart. I really wanted that kiss! Ah, well. If the character's not ready for it, the character's not ready. I can still pout. It's neat to watch Barton come to terms with the idea that he's falling for someone and might possibly have a future, a family, with someone. He does work better with explicit orders, though, doesn't he?
I love Bruce--I blame the Avengers movie. Took my dad to see IM3 and made him wait to very, very end just because I think he's a doll.
And those two Alphas--wth! I almost cant believe Tony would allow scum like that into his place! They need an extra a**-kicking!
Hmmm... but does Harry know more than Harry realizes, or is the attempts on his life really just a matter of pride now?
I understand priority fics, and I am hankering and chomping for more Drackens (and maybe even a little more LF), but I do hope this muse revisits more often. Especially since you hinted its somewhat-near a conclusion!
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June 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
*does happy dance* Do the happy dance Oh Oh Do the happy dance I'm so happy. Love the new chapter.
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June 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Glad u came back to this, been dying to see what happens between Clint and Harry.
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May 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love this!
I wish I could have been present for the Avengers' discussion of Harry's life after Harry left the room to go look at his pictures. I'd love to hear their theories on how he managed to witness hundreds of people's deaths with no one in America ever hearing of the incidents. And, of course, their ideas on how such an emotionally damaged young man ever made it into S.H.I.E.L.D. - obviously, he shouldn't have passed the tests, even giving the lack of paperwork about his past.
Eh, and of course I always hope that at some point, people will be confronted with his magic. ^^ I love it when the worlds clash. :P
- Dime
I wish I could have been present for the Avengers' discussion of Harry's life after Harry left the room to go look at his pictures. I'd love to hear their theories on how he managed to witness hundreds of people's deaths with no one in America ever hearing of the incidents. And, of course, their ideas on how such an emotionally damaged young man ever made it into S.H.I.E.L.D. - obviously, he shouldn't have passed the tests, even giving the lack of paperwork about his past.
Eh, and of course I always hope that at some point, people will be confronted with his magic. ^^ I love it when the worlds clash. :P
- Dime
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May 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
It's nice and, dare I say, cute to see how Harry and Clint are slowly making those connections. Makes me hopeful that despite their rather awful and tragic beginnings, they'll be able to find happiness and comfort with each other... Not to mention have beautiful babies.
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April 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really want to read more of this story! its so interesting, damned cliff hangers!
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March 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
That chapter was really moving and really interesting having Harry start to tell the others about his life. The moment where he realised he could still see those he had lost if he had a pensieve nearly made me cry for him; the idea of not being able to ever see the faces of those you have lost, that would be almost impossible to handle.