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November 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I remember reading this story a long time ago. Although I don't remember it being this good. I think your revisions have definitely helped and I'm really looking forward to reading more. Keep up the good work.
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November 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I remember reading this story before it disappeared from this site. The update is a big improvement over the original, fleshed out quite a bit. Keep up the good work and I hope to see more on this story soon.