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by Mino

person SideyxVenom
schedule March 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
please continue this!!!!!!!!!!!
person ScarletRibbons
schedule February 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
O.0
WHY IS THERE NOT MORE?!?!
This is AWESOME!! Who can get enough Spidey and Venom?
person Anon
schedule January 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Nice. Hope you'll continue.
person Nell
schedule November 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
MORE!!
schedule September 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm not a slash fan, but since we share the same fandom I am determined to share the love.

This introduction is well written, though it is in need of a beta reader. (I'm not volunteering, and if I knew how to track one down for you I'd get one for my own story.) I'm curious as to why you used MJ as Venom's bait and not Gwen, the show declares Peter's love the other way in the season 1 finale. (Nitpicky, I know, and in your defense he clearly is attracted to and distracted by MJ.) The symbiote remembering Peter as its True Love and using Eddie's aggression to force a sexual encounter is a fine base to build off of. While not in my kink, I hope you take the time to follow through and complete this. Good luck and good writing.