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person raresin
schedule August 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am a huge fan of Spiderman and the Spectacular Spiderman. You did an amazing job at capturing the characters and have set up for a great story. keep it up
schedule August 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well I do have a question is Peter is dating MJ shouldn't he be feeling pretty guilty for sleeping with someone else? Usually there is some kind of build up or explanation as to why something like this happens in the good stories so I hope this is addressed (just not them breaking up just to make it work I hate that stuff) so I want to see if Peter can keep the relationship with MJ and Black Cat and we see how this whole things goes. I never got into the show so I don't know what's canon in this or not so I hope I can still follow alone if this is continued.
person Kokuryu
schedule August 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Here goes nothing. I rather like your continuation of The Spectacular Spider-Man so far, it actually feels a lot like the series itself, only more adult, if you will. The interactions between Peter and Mary Jane are quite amusing and heartwarming, and the distance between Peter and Gwen/Harry is palpable and saddening, but not unexpected in light of the events that concluded the series. As for Black Cat, were you inspired by the 90s animated series to have her be able to "power down" from her super-soldier state? That aside, I do like how you approached her inner conflict over Spider-Man, between wanting to hurt him and wanting to fuck him, and now it seems she's been able to do both, what with giving his blood to Miles Warren, who is very likely about to initiate the Spectacular version of the Clone Saga or even create a version of Ultimate Carnage, which was Spider-Man's blood mixed with samples of the Venom symbiote. I also see you've introduced the Hobgoblins, if "Jason" is who I think he is, and I'm pretty sure Spencer and Alistair Smythe will be a tad more important in later chapters than they seem to be right now. I'll be looking forward to your next chapters, because this is too interesting to miss out on.