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for BEAUTIFUL DISASTER

by YamanashiOchinashiIminashi

person Jenna
schedule September 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yikes! I'm glad Charlie didn't shoot anyone. I'm glad you addressed Remy being scared of being beaten, that's why he keeps asking Logan if he's angry, right? Im waiting for that moment when Logan does get angry, poor Remy will be shaking in his boots! Anyways I'm still loving your fic!
person Jenna
schedule September 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying the story so far. I feel bad for Remy, he's so confused. I hope Logan stops being such an ass!
person guest
schedule September 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Really like this story. Love the comedy cant read the next chapter
person originalceenote
schedule August 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I think you repasted an entire block of text over again; I feel like I reread the same paragraphs as I scrolled down.

It's cute. Needs a little beta work for spelling in spots, but Logan and Remy's reactions to each other are very cute. The thought of Logan with Scott, an uptight teacher, makes me chuckle.