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July 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hurray for update! Nice to see this story getting continued!
Liked the beginning with Wasp and Black Widow. I'm not very knowledgeable about the Ultimate verse, so I gotta ask, was Hank Pym really such an abusive husband? Sound's pretty damn different from the version I'm familiar with.
Wow, the venom's really starting to take a toll on Natasha. Wonder how much longer she'll be able to hold out?
Excellent work! Keep it up!
Liked the beginning with Wasp and Black Widow. I'm not very knowledgeable about the Ultimate verse, so I gotta ask, was Hank Pym really such an abusive husband? Sound's pretty damn different from the version I'm familiar with.
Wow, the venom's really starting to take a toll on Natasha. Wonder how much longer she'll be able to hold out?
Excellent work! Keep it up!
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July 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Well good to see you back, I have to assume that Peter will save Natasha and she can finally have her sought after release? I think that's the one most people have been waiting for.
As for additional members for his group of ladies, I would go with Betty Brant, Elektra, Sue Storm and Jean Grey. And if you do allow characters from other places Chun Li, Morrigan Aensland, Mai Shiranui.
Keep up the good work!
As for additional members for his group of ladies, I would go with Betty Brant, Elektra, Sue Storm and Jean Grey. And if you do allow characters from other places Chun Li, Morrigan Aensland, Mai Shiranui.
Keep up the good work!
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July 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Well this was worth the wait, I liked you showing the aftermath of the whole Janet thing, with her state of mind. Although I take it this takes place before Hank put her into the hospital and he was arrested. So will that happen next like he gets pissed and does the same thing, maybe either he suspects she's cheating on him and she won't say with who for instance? Also why is she worried about her biology exactly? She was shown to be a mutant in Utlimate so yeah she was shown to have some wasp like things like the whole eggs stuff but why would that make it hard for Hank to get her pregnant exactly?
I did enjoy when Natasha confronted her as I bet this will come back soon in interesting ways. And we also saw her own fantasy, I was a bit confused at first but I quickly realized what you were doing and that she had gone into a fantasy again. Although it does seems like she has a thing for domination either dominating someone like that dream or with this herself being dominated.
The Captain Stacey thing was a nice plot point and I bet this will continue on with the next chapter as it was soon after this when Gwen found out about Peter I believe. Also it seems like Black Widow will be pushed to make a few choices she will have to make soon when she finds out the other people she's working for feel that she's been compromised. So I can't wait to see what happens next as there is a lot going on, plus he never did finish his talk with his ladies either lol.
I did enjoy when Natasha confronted her as I bet this will come back soon in interesting ways. And we also saw her own fantasy, I was a bit confused at first but I quickly realized what you were doing and that she had gone into a fantasy again. Although it does seems like she has a thing for domination either dominating someone like that dream or with this herself being dominated.
The Captain Stacey thing was a nice plot point and I bet this will continue on with the next chapter as it was soon after this when Gwen found out about Peter I believe. Also it seems like Black Widow will be pushed to make a few choices she will have to make soon when she finds out the other people she's working for feel that she's been compromised. So I can't wait to see what happens next as there is a lot going on, plus he never did finish his talk with his ladies either lol.
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July 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Is Janet gonna be part of the harem, peter would be such a better option then hank. If your going MvC definetely Morrison and Chun-li and maybe juri Han
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May 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Carmilla Black - Scorpion. Melissa Joan Gold - Songbird. Walter Langkowski - Sasquatch. Emil Blonsky - Abomination. Tandy Bowen - Dagger. Tyrone Johnson - Cloak.
My choice - Black Widow
My choice - Black Widow
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March 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Carmilla Black - Scorpion, Melissa Joan Gold - Songbird, Walter Langkowski - Sasquatch, Emil Blonsky - Abomination, Tandy Bowen - Dagger, Tyrone Johnson - Cloak
My Choice: Alison Blaire - Dazzler (Ultimate X-Men)
My Choice: Alison Blaire - Dazzler (Ultimate X-Men)
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February 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really wish I could read your story. The plot and ideas behind the word are quite smart and imaginative. I really like watching Spider-man adjust to situations out of his depth. The inclusion of beautiful women filling out his desires and troubles is classic and believable. You have great materials to work with but the quality of your words is just not improving.
Your biggest problem is run on sentences. Short thoughts carry a lot of weight. Cut back on the conjunctions. Write assertivey. Try not to say everything multiple times. If you don't know if a word or clause is necessary follow this a advice: when in doubt, leave it out.
I won't be following this story anymore. I wish you the best with those who do.
Your biggest problem is run on sentences. Short thoughts carry a lot of weight. Cut back on the conjunctions. Write assertivey. Try not to say everything multiple times. If you don't know if a word or clause is necessary follow this a advice: when in doubt, leave it out.
I won't be following this story anymore. I wish you the best with those who do.
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February 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Liked reading the new chapter. Please write more soon. Also,
Carmilla Black - Scorpion.
Melissa Joan Gold - Songbird aka Screaming Mimi.
Walter Langkowski - Sasquatch.
Emil Blonsky - Abomination.
Tandy Bowen - Dagger.
Tyrone Johnson - Cloak.
Do I get it right? If so, the next woman to be seduced by Peter Parker should be Gwen Stacy, followed by Felicia Hardy, and lastly by Kitty Pride. Please let me know. Thank you. :)
Carmilla Black - Scorpion.
Melissa Joan Gold - Songbird aka Screaming Mimi.
Walter Langkowski - Sasquatch.
Emil Blonsky - Abomination.
Tandy Bowen - Dagger.
Tyrone Johnson - Cloak.
Do I get it right? If so, the next woman to be seduced by Peter Parker should be Gwen Stacy, followed by Felicia Hardy, and lastly by Kitty Pride. Please let me know. Thank you. :)
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February 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Carmilla Black - Scorpion, Melissa Joan Gold - Songbird, Walter Langkowski - Sasquatch, Emil Blonsky - Abomination (last two I'm switching up simply because there nameing convention demands it.) Tyrone Johnson - Cloak, Tandy Bowen - Dagger. Though I hope C,D, and Quatch don't stay bad.
as for the Girl she hasn't shown up in the Ultimate Universe yet so you get to be creative: Doreen Green aka Squirrel Girl.
as for the Girl she hasn't shown up in the Ultimate Universe yet so you get to be creative: Doreen Green aka Squirrel Girl.
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February 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Man! That was a long chapter! I noticed this one felt much bigger in relation to the Ultimate Marvel Universe, with lots of stuff involving Norman Osborn and Nick Fury, plenty of mentions of Captain American, as well as Black Widow and Abdul Al-Rahman (didn't Cap kill him? Eh, must be before that.)
Did not see the sex scene with Wasp coming, I must say. That said, it was still certainly awesome.
I couldn't even begin to guess at most of the Sinister Six, and it looks like others have already figured it out, so I'll leave that alone. I'll just be happy when Kitty Pryde/Shadow Cat makes her appearance. Also really looking forward to Spidey learning about Tigra, as well as having encounters with Black Cat and Black Widow.
As always, I look forward to your future work!
Did not see the sex scene with Wasp coming, I must say. That said, it was still certainly awesome.
I couldn't even begin to guess at most of the Sinister Six, and it looks like others have already figured it out, so I'll leave that alone. I'll just be happy when Kitty Pryde/Shadow Cat makes her appearance. Also really looking forward to Spidey learning about Tigra, as well as having encounters with Black Cat and Black Widow.
As always, I look forward to your future work!