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Okay which Mary Jane are you using? Because the Best MJ is from the Ultimate Comics and shes a nerd like Peter and in fact helped/helps him out quite a bit. So Liz's thoughts are a surprising in the sense that MJ would obviously care about Peter they've best friends since forever.

very good story you have here like the nice balance of smut and story athough it would be nice if you described nipple color.it would be nice to see a team formation of shield new team like the ultimate spider man show. but having instead spidey and his girls with the addition of white tiger and wasp as the team leader. let the wasp live instead of being eaten. and have the ant/giant man given a taste of his own medicine by the spider when he catches the man in the act of harming one of his women.(i dont like pepole who abuse there loved ones. and unless its in the field or sparing ring a man should never hit a woman.) i like the avengers:emh wasp and the ultimate avengers movies so i would like to see her live. as for spideys venom it seems to hold the girls longer the more they get as it seems to alter the dna almost to crave peters attention you could say. i could give all the answers to the contest but i would have to cheat and use marvelpeadia to do it so i will say that blonsky is abomination enemy of the hulk and would be a mix of kimodo dragon and maybe bearded lizard DNA mixed with hulk serum and oz formula. i would say. cammila black is one of the avengers kids forget who i think its banners and has powers over posions throw i bleave her left arm witch is her stinger and posibly a mix of scorpion bee and other centipeed dna mix into her.. sorry for spelling errors. keep up the good work.

I would like to see a bit of action of Peter with his Aunt May if it´s possible, she's hot in Ultimate, she being or not in the harem.

I would like to see Laura Kinney (X-23) added to the harem too.

Great Story, also would it be possible to see Morrigan Aensland added to the Harem

i would like to see 616 she-hulk
Carol Danvers doesn't matter which one and power girl

zarda- power princess

Great story. One of the better ones I've seen on here. If I had to throw a name out there to add to the harem... how about Blink from the Exiles?

Welcome back. You've certainly returned in fine form, and one of the things I like about your work is that while there's plenty of sex going on, there's also lots of plot and character development, like Nick Fury comforting Spider-Man (in his own way) after he nearly killed his imposter for killing Captain Stacy. Not to mention Wasp and Black Widow both wanting more of what Peter can give them, and how that complicates their work in the Ultimates and Natasha's ulterior goals and motives. Oh, and the complex web of relationships Peter's already navigating, as his customarily low self-esteem leads him to doubt the girls he's roped into his harem would stick around for the long haul and then trying to comfort Gwen despite her hating Spider-Man for her father's death. You've still got it, and I'm looking forward to more of this story.

Another interesting chapter. Now I'm waiting for the comfrontation between Spidey and Natasha.

BTW. To the harem girls. I would want that Janet is a permament member but it will also be hot seeing Elektra and Sue Storm.

Interesting chapter its good to see Spider-man back on the right path. As for who I want I already said that I want to see Doreen Green in the Harem.