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Well that was a very good chapter, nice arc with the Black Cat going like in the comics only now Elecktra is out of the picture. Also really enjoyed the sex scene with Janet and it makes sense to have her here to help patch him up as well. So Liz told the others about what's happening with her, that should be interesting to see how that goes and what they do with it.

i still dont get why the rest of the world thinks the usa wants to take over ruleing it when it is US law that states we cannot forcfuly anex another contory into our own.

Hey man, when I first saw this story and read it I was hooked. Every time you created a chapter I was eagerly anticipating the next one. With each chapter you make and all of the events and mysteries that's happening it makes me giddy with anticipation of wanting to know what's next. I am glad to say that you sir are an amazing writer even if it takes some time to get it down. Don't stop, and eagerly waiting for the next one.

Fun chapter, I don't have much to say besides the fact that I really enjoy the story... so thanks for writing!

I've been waiting patiently for this update and you did not disappoint me. A very sexy scene between Wasp & Spidey. I particularly loved the conflicting emotions between the two before they gave into their base desires. I look forward to your next update.

Love your story for its flawless combination of lemons and story. Having read countless fanfiction I only have read one other Author who could do this (Slyfer101) and both you have extreme talent. I also applaud you for how you have peter taking control of his harem with out going completely evil puppet master this as well as the bdsm elements you bring into play makes this easily one of my top ten maybe five depending on my mood and I constantly wait for your next chapter so please write SOON!

Well it's been awhile since I heard from you so I was worried something happened but glad to see you managed to post this. It was a good chapter that had a lot of character development in it as we get to see a lot of Black Widow's past as well as Karla's and we see how much of a major manipulator she is, you really pulled that off well with her character in how she can get into the heads of others and mess with them just like in the comics.

Welcome back. And rather intriguing setup here as you depict Karla's and Natasha's analyses of the situations they're in and their manipulations to ensure that they both end up on top, or at least end up surviving. Poor Songbird's going to be in for a crash when she realizes how much Karla used and lied to her. Intrigued by the twists you've put on Karla, Songbird, and Cloak and Dagger --- what with the latter two apparently being drug dealers in this version. Then again, you probably came up with this before the canon Ultimate Cloak and Dagger debuted in the Ultimate Spider-Man comics, so I don't really mind, and it is a pretty interesting twist on their original backstory, that they got their powers from having designer drugs tested on them. Looking forward to seeing how this all turns out, especially with what Karla's psychoanalysis of Spider-Man might be.

Really enjoyed this story, one of the best spider man harem story along with (Dark Urges, side of effects, and life is a game). I'm very glad your moving the story along. Something I don't understand though with the number of time he inject Liz her powers should have more visible effect by now nice twist on the twin thing and I don't know if you said it or not but is the bombshells powers going to grow or change? Anyway great work and keep it up.

That waw a worldwide chapter it was a awesome read .I hope Gwin joins soon I can't wait to to what happens next between them all and to them all next .I hope he can make all four Mary's good and stop killing people.