Sorry I didn't review this earlier didn't know you posted a new chapter. Well that's an interesting backstory to Lori you gave her and you added in a twisted version of Shanna into this as well. I was a bit confussed with the Black Widow part as I thought she was still recovering and it seemed pretty quick how it suddenly went into action like that. I don't remember if you set it up in an earlier chapter or not.
The story so far has been incredible. Your Spider-Man Adult Fanfiction have been the best fanfiction that I have seen yet! Keep up the good work man!
Whoo, welcome back. I liked the opening scenes with Mary and her multiple personalities. Peter's biggest mistake thus far is coming back to haunt him, and there might be literally hell to pay in the end. I also liked your expansion of Lori's backstory, particularly in how you set up your takes on Mister Negative and Shanna the She-Devil, and that trick Lori used on Jessica and Lana was quite stimulating. Gonna have to figure out a way to incorporate that into my own stories some time. The confrontation between Natasha and Yelena and how the outcome of that started to deepen Natasha's relationship with Peter? Loved that. Absolutely loved that. And now that she's getting an infusion of his blood . . . she might actually live up to her name. Great job here. Looking forward to more of this story and your others that you've launched more recently.
Out of curiosity, I don't suppose this might mean that later on Lana will have a fetish for being spanked by her "daddy"? Plus, is there a chance that at least one of the girls could have or develop a preference for anal?
That aside, the plot is definitely deepening, as Peter's gong to find out sooner or later what's happened with Liz and MJ as a result of him injecting his OZ-laced venom into them too many times and that's going to be a tangle to get through, especially when Janet lets on to him what she's learned about his DNA. The police having a sample of Spider-Man's blood on Elektra's sai and Captain Jeanne DeWolfe being the Kingpin's woman on the inside of the NYPD is likely to complicate things even more, and going to a more personal level of complication . . . I'd like to see how Peter does with being the man in the Bombshells' lives, in both the familial and sexual contexts.
On a more philosophical note, however, I'd say that when it comes to burdens on/to society, the reason they're called such is that society would usually rather not deal with these people but is forced to for various reasons. For example, we have criminals to be rehabilitated or imprisoned for the good of the law-abiding population and disabled individuals who as citizens and persons are still entitled to the same rights and opportunities as everyone else. Then there are individuals in problematic situations that still have at least human rights, if not civil rights, that need to be addressed when deciding how to deal with them, regardless of political popularity. It's a hard needle to thread by any measure.