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I liked chapter 2 and I also liked the little extra things you did like when MJ was alone at home adding in a little more erotic parts into the chapter in a neat way. I also liked how you expanded a bit in the end and that you had MJ messing with Liz while at the same time slowly making MJ a bit more 'predatory' leading up to a bigger payoff later on in this story as I like the little bits like that in stories that help build up certain plots.

The sex scenes were done very well as usual and were always great to read as well. Now that you got some elements set up like Liz watching them and slowly showing MJ thinking about her changes. I'm glad it's a slow build and not a sudden change as well. I'm looking forward to what the next chapter will have as well and where you take this story.

Love this story. Please update soon.

Wow! This is really good. Great idea, and I loved Dark Urges so this should be good.

Question, but are you planning on having Black Widow and Black Cat joining Peter like they did in Dark Urges? I'd like to see that.

For anyone wondering, the story taken from is "Blackout", a very wonderful Neon Genesis Evangelion fic that's been on the web for some time.

Well glad you got this back up and I hope your account won't get hacked again. Like I said before this was a good start to things, the first scene set up the new slightly AU additional power Peter has in this (which is kind of like Spider-Man 2099 had venom teeth too) and I do like that you started it off with the scene of Peter telling MJ his secret. That was always one of my fav parts of the comics and I like this version you did as well. I look forward to more and how they deal with it. I mean will it pick up right where you left off with him kind of wondering how things got out of hand so quickly and other stuff like that.

I've really been looking forward to this story. Agent-G told me about it a while back. I love the concept. It actually does play off some of the elements hinted at in the comic. Oz did have some very different effects on Peter's clones so it makes sense that it would have different effects on others. Him having retractable fangs to inject Oz like a spider is a nice touch. It's subtle, creative, and makes for a very hot moment. lol In addition to the concept, you did a great job detailing the sex scene. I've seen one too many stories were such details are glossed over. You did a great job with the descriptions and what not. It was nice and vivid, which always helps to make it more enjoyable. Personally, I like how this turned out better than when Aunt May interrupted them in the comics. lol And now that MJ has a heavy dose of Oz in her, I look forward to seeing the effects. She turned into quite a creature in the Clone Saga. It'll be interesting to see what she does here. It'll also be interesting to see what happens when Peter starts biting other girls. I was a huge fan of Agent-G's Dark Urges so I'm glad a story like this has come along. Keep up the excellent work! I look forward to the next chapter. Until next time, take care and best wishes.

MarvelMaster616

I have to say, I rather enjoyed this first entry, and it seems that Norman Osborn's experiments have unwittingly given birth to a new species --- homo araneus --- which will certainly mean trouble for him when he comes back. Won't he have a very unpleasant surprise when he tries to make off with Mary Jane this time around? I will certainly be looking forward to how you handle that part, and speaking of MJ, did you give her Spider-Man 2099's power-set, what with the talons shredding Peter's bed sheets and all? If so, that's actually quite awesome.

And yes, I cannot forget the love scene between Peter and Mary Jane. Not only was it positively erotically charged, it was also very romantic, hence me calling it a love scene and not merely a sex scene. You did capture the passion and love Peter and Mary Jane have for each other very well, and I enjoyed that the most from the first time I read this. Just one question, how're they gonna react to MJ's new spider-powers?