I am not kidding when I say this is one of my favorite Spider-Man stories on the internet. The adult scenes are well thought and the character dialogue is fantastic. I would love to see this story continue in the future! :)
So happy to see this updated. I love this story!
I enjoyed chap 10. I dont normally like orgy scenes but you did a good job with it. Looks like Lori is gonna have boob powers.
And we missed you, too. Or at least I did. A welcome return to fine form, in any case. Loved the interactions between Peter and the ladies, especially Tigra --- gonna be looking forward to him finding out who she really is, and his reaction when that happens. The plot is definitely thickening in more ways than one, and I'll also be looking forward to seeing where that goes. All in all, keep up the great work and I will be awaiting the next chapter.
Well that was a good chapter, I especially liked the Spider-Man/Tigra part that was worth the wait and I can't wait until MJ brings her other side out with the others at some future point as well. I liked the little details on how different she would be with her fun and all. I have to say her interaction with him seemed very much like how you would expect Blackcat to act or has acted at times with the chasing and flirty manner.
you had mary jane give peter a bj in the girls lockerroom shower earlier, then in this chapter you said that she had never given head to anyone before. I like this story, especially since it has a plot. So please keep writing, just be mindful of small errors like this.
Man I didn't even know that this was up yet, still it was a good chapter. I liked that bit with Wasp at the start as her going through what she knows and the theory of what could be done with Peter was a good touch as well. Sex scene of course was fun as always, and the ending I think was good too with showing Felecia had been working out to get back into shape and her thoughts as well.
The delay was well worth it for this chapter. Thanks so much, and bringing in Sara Bailey? Ah, you sure know how to mine obscure canon for interesting characters to include. If so, how about Teresa Durand-Parker from the Family Business original graphic novel? That aside, I think my favorite scene was the one between Lori and Peter, not just for the sex, which was pretty hot, but for the strengthening bond of love between them. Always great to see, even more than the sex, and looking forward to what'll happen when Natasha, Janet, and Felicia all collide with Spider-Man again, as well as the official introduction of Typhoid Mary to the web-slinger. Chickens really gonna come home to roost there, and I'm glad Peter's still haunted by what he did there, if only because that means he is a genuinely good person like anybody who knows him from the comics and most adaptations knows him to be. Definitely going to be waiting with anticipation for the next chapter. See you then.
Loved the new chapter! Hope you update soon! If you could add Rogue, X-23 and maybe Silk to Peter's Harem, it would be very awesome!
A lot of exposition in this chapter, however much of it is very well written and very interesting to read. The scene of Lori and Peter is also very good and somewhat heartwarming to read through. Sara Bailey is a very obscure and old charactor and it was fun to see you bring her to the story.
The epilogue scene of this chapter with Felicia Hardy is also very good because it shows what kind of person Felicia is.
I love your work and hope that you update soon but don't feel pressured if you take some time to write the best you can. As always, keep up the good work.