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for The Maid and the Monster

by TheOtherAdler

person Pat4pat
schedule January 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This was...SO amazingly hot! :)
schedule May 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow...just...wow...mmmmm....

You let me breathless that was an amazingly written fic and to think it was all off of that one prompt!

Great job dear!

~Mistress
person _Raug_
schedule August 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is really fabulously written. I just -had- to write you a review.

I find that, after I wrote my own fan fic (a Harry Potter fic, written over the course of two years, that ended up being longer than any book in canon, and quite highly polished) I can't stand reading fanfiction anymore. I used to read it quite a lot, but in the course of writing my own, I ruined fanfiction for myself. I created such a careful, highly-polished product that as soon as I tried to read another fic, I would instantly be taken out of it with spelling errors, grammatical errors, horrible writing styles, horrible out-of-character behavior/dialogue for canonical characters, etc.

This is the first piece of fanfiction that I have been able to read in a LONG time. It's MARVELOUS. Extremely well-written, very true to the character of Loki, nicely polished... just all-around fabulous. Really, really well done. I urge you to keep writing! And, of course, if you keep writing an erotic Loki, I wouldn't complain ;)
schedule August 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm shocked there are not more reviews, especially for a story containing our favorite silver-tongued wordsmith. :) Definitely loved the play in Loki's emotions and the build up for the entire scene. I think it works well and I look forward to more of your posts.