rate_review Reviews

NOOOO it can't stop there! It just can't! If there isn't a continuation i think i will just cry.

But seriously, amazingly done :)

~Mistress

Very interesting story, quite enjoyed it. Have you considered switching it to present tense? Some of the tenses are present but most of them are past tense, the story would probably read smoother if they were all the same and (in my opinion, as a proffessional writing student) present tense would work better for the story.

By the way, if you needed help with that just email me back. I'm always happy to get some editing practice in :)

This is the best ever!!! I thought it would have been more towards thor but it went in loki direction. Totall loki fan thank you so much. I loved it keep writin more. ;3