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for Rogue's Desires

by MarvelFan98

schedule October 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Your stories continue to be a quality read and this one definitely raised the bar! I remember back in the early comics of Wolverine and the X-men how Kid Gladiator asked Rogue to be part of his harem. I would have liked to see him be a bit more aggressive in pursuing her in the comics, but that never happened. You more than made up for it here! Plus, you got Warbird involved. That definitely added a little flare to this hookup. lol Her warrior tendencies and flexible sexual proclivities were nicely detailed. I also like how you worked out the dynamic with her and Kid Omega, having him be pretty much a master/slave sort of deal. You keep finding interesting ways to have Rogue enjoy herself and she definitely got her fill here in more ways than one. lol Another fine job. Please keep up the excellent work? Who else can Rogue seduce at this point? I look forward to seeing what you have planned!

MarvelMaster616
schedule October 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Okay now chapter 3 was interesting, you didn't just repeat the previous chapter like in 2 but you started to change it up a bit. First with having Rogue experience her first lesbian experience but her first threesome too. I also liked the ending with her reflecting on things as she's even worried about what us happening to her and why she's doing and what she's becoming.

Now that this is happening I wonder what else will happen, will you have her have another moment with Warbird when it's just them, or maybe Karma if you want to do a F/F scene only. Maybe two men at the same time or how about another Marvel character that isn't from the X-books that she runs across?
person BlaqFire
schedule October 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Best chapter so far. I agree that two men would be the next logical step...Sam and Bobby perhaps? They always had that friendship that was slightly underscored by the flirty relationship with Bobby and the fact that Sam has occasionally made comments about dating her.
person JViper
schedule September 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Just recently discovered this story. Read the previous one and like this one better, bu that's because it's quentin on the other one.
Rogue always been one of my favorites especially in the Joe Mad style way back. It's always nice to see her comic self getting attention, not a fan of movies rogue.
Anyway, really liked both chapters and I'm hoping to see more from this.
schedule August 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you threw in another chapter. At this rate, Rogue's going to be every boy's favorite teacher at the Jean Grey Institute at the rate she's going. lol I wouldn't have chosen Genesis as her next young partner, but you made it work. I still thought the first chapter with Hellion was better, but this was still enjoyable. Your attention to detail with these scenes are very good. I can see your style getting more refined. I encourage you continue doing so with future scenes. Any chance that for your next scene you'll throw some other girls into the mix? Whatever you have planned, I look forward to seeing it. Keep up the great work and thanks for all your support on Festival of X.

MarvelMaster616
schedule August 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well it wasn't bad but it did feel kind of too similar to the last chapter is she just going to fuck students or will you actually have others? I mean on this trip it's a perfect opportunity for her to meet up and screw other Marvel characters outside of the X-books hell she could decided to just go out and get some distance ends up at a bar/club and gets picked up there for a wild night. Plus the sex scenes seem to follow the same formula try switching it up a bit at times so it doesn't feel the same to help out.

person flyingdragon30
schedule August 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love the idea of the field trip. Definitely gives the story a lot of potential for unusual settings.
person evilerk
schedule August 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Amazing story you have going..love a naughty Rogue..can't wait to the next chapter!
schedule July 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well although I didn't care for the other story I prefer this one as I like it more. I like how Rogue is experience a bit of a sexual awakening as she does have a lot of time to make up for for all the years she couldn't touch another living person. So I am eager to see what she does, although she will have to be careful about her partners as I bet she wouldn't want it to get out she's sleeping with just anyone. But I like how you got them changing it up and exploring and him using his powers. Although I thought those hands were connected and cybernetic like Karma's missing leg.

I do wonder if this could cause problems as him looking for another round of sex or him bragging about it to someone. I also wonder who else she'll do and also if she'll regret what she just did. I also wonder if she'll start to explore other sexual themes to see what she likes and doesn't like. Although one thing, I can't see her sticking something in her mouth that had just been in her ass that's just really nasty even in porn films when they prepare for that kind of thing.
schedule July 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Another nice little one-shot showing Rogue having a little fun with her students! At the rate you're going, you could turn this into a full blown series. lol Your scenes are very nicely detailed and very well-written. I also like how you remembered that Julian doesn't have his hands in the comics at the moment and is relying on prosthetics. I would have liked to see him get a bit more creative with his telekinesis, but for the most part you had him and Rogue enjoy themselves a great deal. You mixed up the positions and even had Rogue beg for it up the ass. Always a plus. lol Nice bit of drama with Julian lamenting over Laura as well. It's a shame they couldn't have a scene like this. But I think after having sex with Rogue, he'll feel a lot better. lol Again, great story. I really enjoyed it. I hope you continue to do more like this. If you've been keeping up with the events of Avengers vs. X-men, I think you'll see there are plenty of opportunities. I look forward to whatever you have planned next and thanks for your support on Festival of X. Until next time, take care and best wishes.

MarvelMaster616