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for Rogue's Desires

by MarvelFan98

person Creed Vicious
schedule April 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is great stuff! Hot, hot, hot! Really love your work, keep it up.
schedule March 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This has been a great story to read from the beginning, my friend. You've done a great job putting Rogue in all sorts of hot, lurid situations. And this was no exception! Rogue in a bikini tempting a young mutant like Paras is just a perfect fantasy. lol Even though it ended with Rogue getting caught, I'm sure he'll commit that experience to memory. Once again, you demonstrate an amazing knack for detail and descriptions. There really aren't a lot of stories on this website that area s well-written as yours so I applaud you for taking the time to make sure that each chapter is enjoyable to read. And I really like how you sort of explained things in the end. It could have been easy to just make Rogue a nymphomaniac with a taste for teenage boys. But having it be a trick played by Kid Omega makes a lot more sense and ensures her character isn't too OOC. I think it was a fitting, logical end to this story and again, I thank you for writing it. I certainly hope you write more X-men stories! Keep up the excellent work and thanks for your support on my stories as well. Until next time, take care and best wishes!

MarvelMaster616
person Royboy
schedule March 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hot, hot, hot! Well done!
person Anon
schedule February 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
An interesting mix so far. Rogue's character finally grows in chapter 6 and I think that will give the series a different feel, which is good for keeping it fresh. Looking forward to the future chapters.
person evilerk
schedule February 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I very much love this story..I hope it continues for many more chapters!
schedule February 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I didn't review this sooner. Once again, you provide a real treat! Rogue has really become quite the nymph. It may be somewhat unrealistic and out of character, but it's still a lot of fun to read. It was only a matter of time before Quentin took full advantage of it. That's one part that you captured that is perfectly in character. When Quentin sees an opportunity to exploit something, he'll do it and do it with a cocky grin. Using his powers was a very creative way for Rogue to push the envelope so to speak and get more action from multiple students. She certainly seemed to enjoy it and so did her students. Once again, you did a great job with the descriptions and a great job organizing the scenes. I applaud you for your efforts! Will this be the last chapter? I hope you intend to make more X-men stories. Please keep up the excellent work! Until next time, take care and best wishes.

MarvelMaster616
person JB
schedule February 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter and you made the natural progression of Rogue eventually saying screw it (no pun intended) and doing what she wants to do. I'm interested to see what will happen if and when she gets caught. Now, if she's going for students is Angel on the table? Physically he may still be the same guy she knew, but he's much younger mentally now. I could see her getting off on re-teaching sex to a former playboy.
schedule January 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This was another fun installment in this series. I see Rogue is expanding her sexual horizons with each chapter. lol This time she had a little girl/girl action with Roxy and I'm all for that. lol Once again, you wrote the scene very well. It had all the right details and was very hot. Idie's role always struck me as a bit annoying with her talk of sin and what not. I'm glad she was silenced so to speak. lol But with all the action Rogue is getting, is it only a matter of time before someone finds out? Who else could she hook up with before it blows up in her face? Whatever you have planned for this, I look forward to seeing it! Keep up the great work and thank you for your support of Festival of X!

MarvelMaster616
schedule November 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This was another great installment of this entertaining and exotic series. Rogue continues to have her way with her students. Although I must admit, I really didn't know who Nezhno. I had to look him up first before continuing, but I think you wrote him quite nicely. It was funny how the training escalated quickly. It had a very dominance/submission vibe to it and Rogue went with it. Your scenes were once again very nicely detailed and very descriptive, which is just too rare with X-men stories these days. And as always, I applaud you for it. I noticed this scene had a number of similarities with the previous scene as well. I'm not saying that's a bad thing, but I think if you're going to do future chapters you should try to mix it up a bit more. And Rogue's reaction at the end was somewhat odd, but I guess she's trying to keep her proclivities secret and she's running out of ways to do so. I'm curious as to how far you plan to take this. How many more students is Rogue going to sleep with before someone at the institute finds out? Whatever you decide, I look forward to reading more. Please keep up the excellent work! You write a quality product here and I hope you continue to do so.

Regards,
MarvelMaster616
person evilerk
schedule November 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hope you continue this story..I just love it!