rate_review Reviews

Good to see your back man. I like how this is coming along so far and I really liked the chapter with surge (love extreme stuff), keep it up dude.

Good to see your back, keep it up.

I think you went a little too far with the Surge chapter man, that should have killed her doing something like that as she doesn't have any powers that would allow her to survive something like that. I know you want to push things but you might want to keep a limit on things at times like this.

Well I was surprised to see this you've been gone for so long I was afraid that you wouldn't update your story anymore but since you put this up I guess that you got some kind of inspiration again. So that's good, I take it this will be a short side story that will tie into the main one? I have to admit the old and new New Mutants together is a neat idea, I also wonder if there will be other fics like this when you bring in new women that get kidnapped for this.

At first I thought you were going to have Dani and her group rape the virgins in order to 'prepare' them like something you did earlier. Actually I wouldn't be surprised if the older women were ordered to do just that. Maybe use those over sized strap-ons we've seen, fisting the girls or both, hell maybe they get raped while raping the younger girls.

Dusk's reaction was pretty much spot on, how a think someone like her would react to something like this as she is a very religious person and it would break her down the fastest. One thing I don't get, you had it mentioned that they 'took her claws' as X23 said. I don't get it, why would they do that I mean sure I get it but even if they surgically removed the blades, there are bones under those blades and they would just grow back. We've seen this happen with Wolverine when his metal was taken so wouldn't it make more sense to find a way to keep her in line by threatening the lives of her friends?

I'm also surprised since Arcade said he didn't want Moonstone because of how much trouble she was he got X23 who is a lot more trouble.

Still it is good to see you back to writing and I hope to see more of this and your other story as well eventually.

Now this is a great, great one. I almost wonder if it's by birthday! Arcade's New Niche is one of my favorite stories in this site, mainly because of the creative scenarios and imagery it brings up, but now it has just my favorite bunch of mutants! I love it.

Liked the story a lot, from the mental anguish the girls suffer from their personalities being well-thought out and described very well! I have two things to add, only.

I would make Laura less sarcastic, since she is very observant but not really a talker, and I would add Mercury. First because she has an awesome look for this kind of story, but also because I would be very curious of the ramifications being in a place like this might offer. She has 0 human contact, and nobody wants her, I wonder if she would like getting fucked (at least physically), while her mind tells her she is a degenerate woman, and so on. If you could add her, I think it would be great!

I heavily endorse this story. If you need any help with it, or maybe someone to illustrate it, let me know!