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for The Truth of Lies

by Narrie

person lokiworshipper13
schedule August 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed the first 3 chapters very much. I know you stated that it will probably be a while before you get to update again and I will patiently wait for the next chapter!! :)
person Pinkieswore
schedule July 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You have a lot of good voice here! I didn't understand that she was walking with the guards in the first chapter so just some light editing perhaps? I like the plot and I would love to read another chapter. :)