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Just finished reading it. Some nice stuff there, i like the character work you did with Bobby and Jean before they're bout and Laura is great too. Not sure about her being the instigator but every since i read agent-g's sex ed. i wanted to see a bit where Alex got her to try something new and treated her like a girl he was making love to rather than fucking like animals.

So decent chapter, really wondering what you're going to come up with next. Random nitpick, if Amara's part of a novo roma thing. why are the names of the god and legendary figures and things the greek versions instead of the roman ones? Aphrodite and Ares instead of Venus and Mars?

Great chapter. I find it interesting that you have the thread going of Warren being a little more cautious then most. He seemed reluctant with Emma to give in fully and again here with Rogue. Even though it's a classic pairing I'd like to see a Betsy/Warren scene where she finally gets him to cut loose a bit. Since he loves and trusts her it would make the most sense that she could bring that out of him.

Well for Chapter 7 I liked the first and last parts the best. It was nice to have Jean and Bobby as he was the only one of the original team that never did make a pass at Jean so this was a nice one. I also liked how you used some of his powers in this, I felt you could have done a few more things, like trailing it over more sensual spots like the spine and stuff but over all it was nicely done.

I see you also have Rogue starting to branch out although given that she's never done anal before maybe a bit more discomfort for a bit as she got used to it might have helped but then maybe she's a natural at it (some are and some can't do it after all). I also hope this is a set up for that major one that we talked about having Amara bring in some help for Rogue to really let loose.

The X-23 and Prodigy thing...I don't know. I'm pretty sure his powers only work on living people he can't absorb knowledge or skills from inanimate objects so it really didn't make any sense to me why she thought he would be good for it with his mimic abilities. In fact his powers should have reflected on her given she was in his range I think. So it all felt a little off from the start of the scene between them at least it did for me so I kind of skipped it.

Great, great story.

First of all the premise is great, and I think it fits with the X-Men, a group which, unlike the Avengers, has always been pretty sexual and, at times, pretty libidinous.

Second of all, I like the characters involved. It chooses to stick with Jean Grey (someone we don't see in ages in the comics) aswell as some New X-Men (Noriko, Julian) aswell as some of their development that has recently erased and ditched in comics for random reasons (like the romance betwen Julian and Laura). I like the depiction of the characters, and I love how the scenes are described. Very creative scenarios and pretty hot sex scenes make this worth reading.

Great new chapter. I liked the Betsy/Noriko/Logan scene and LOVED the Kitty/James scene. I do think that too big of a deal was made about her petite frame and his huge dick. I mean, obviously Kitty could handle it, and it's not like there's never been instances in history of daintier girls getting fucked by large cocks, especially in the porn industry.

Well I see that you're starting to experiment a bit more with the various characters such as a threesome with Betsy and Surge was a nice touch I hadn't thought of before. I did enjoy that Kurt and Ororo it was more sexual and not just some kind of animal fuck or something, I think what you did with them worked for the best. I hope to see some other things like this when they take their time to really explore each other. Didn't expect Kitty getting into anal though or into huge guys that are built but then you never know with some people.

I do wonder what you'll have next although I think I have an idea from that one with Rogue was hinted at so if its what I think I can't wait.

Jubilee's going to pissed if she find out Wolverine was hankering for asians and didn't ask her...

Kurt and Ororo are probably my favourite pairing out of this batch. But I still think your character often get a bit too chatty during sex. Just a personal preference.

Kitty/Warpath wins 'randomest pairing' but you justified it well enough. And it was a decent anal scene. Again lots of talking but Warpath's concerns made sense.

Awesome, awesome chapter. Super hot group action and I cannot wait to see what those naughty Cuckoos have planned.

Wow. Gambit's an asshole. Though Storm/Gambit is a nice pairing. Not so keen on the Emma Frost scene. But that could be because its Emma Frost.

Hmm. Now what are the Cuckoos up to sneaking out to Nova Roma to get in on the action or just mentally influencing the mansion to spawn an orgy there? Only time will tell.

Great new chapter.

I loved both scenes, especially the one with Emma. It was interesting to see her in different type of role then usual. And I can't wait to see what the Cuckoos have planned.

Keep up the great work.