rate_review Reviews

Well it was an entertaining chapter as always. I enjoyed the talk between Scott and Ororo as they are both leaders of the X-Men or at least the top two that I think most think about. So it was nice to have a scene between them as it's not usually done. I also hope that many enjoy the part with Logan/Kitty/Jubilee since there are a lot of Logan/Kitty and Logan/Jubilee fanfics so fans of that should get something out on it.

One odd thing though for this chapter the words don't fit on the screen unless I change the font size do you have that problem too?

Nice chapter, MM. You've gotten quite creative here. I think I most like Danni's illusions going funky when she climaxed.

Looks like Scott/Ororo next time?

Great chapter...the Emma/Julian scene may be my favorite so far. For pairing suggestions I'd like to see a Kitty/Warren scene...both Kitty scenes have been great and Warren hasn't done a one on one yet aside from the first chapter.

I like the new chapter with the exploration of powers although I guess in this Dani was never depowered since she used her powers I forget if M-day took place or not in this universe. Plus it could lead to other ideas for her using those powers too. I hadn't thought of Lorna using her powers on Colossus like that before although it makes sense. I liked the bit with Josh using his powers on Tabitha like that as I don't know if they ever bothered to go into detail about his powers other than heal/kill touch in the comics. So it's nice to see some expansion. Although Emma was most likely one of my favs and I wonder if more will play around with role play as this continues on.

OK, Remy gets a failing grade in biology. Women do not have prostates. Like he seems to imply.

Though i like Jubilee I much preferred the first couple of scenes to this fic. Also Remy, randomly inserting french words into your speech still makes sound like a jackass to me. But that's canon and i shouldn't complain.

Love this story! You have the characters spot on and I love the descriptions.

And if I may suggest a coupling for the next chapter, I would love to see Josh Foley, Elixir, and Cessily Kincaid, Mercury, make sensual use of their powers with one another!

Just finished reading the latest installment. I very much enjoyed Scott/Amara and Remy/Jubes. The image of Amara superheating her fresh-from-the-pool self to dry off and emerge in a cloud of steam was simultaneously sexy and funny as hell - which is totally okay, since sex can be funny as well as fun. Also, I'm glad my suggested revision - about giving the group an opportunity to opt-out - provided a conversation-starter for Scott and Amara.

The Remy/Jubes section was interesting because it was unique, what with the use of the toys and such. In a lot of stories, the progression is usually "thinks about doing anal" or "expresses curiosity about anal" > "immediately tries it with ridiculously oversized partner"; here, though, Jubilee eases into it by trying a smaller toy first without jumping straight to having Remy ream her raw. Though what you're writing is more hardcore porn, I like little touches like these.

Well like always enjoyed the chapter, I think I liked the Scott/Amara scene the best out of the three that were shown. I was surprised by all the toys used in the last one, don't remember you trying something like that before. Although I'm kind of surprised that this place would even have modern showers, I always thought that Nova Roma was more behind in technology than the rest of the world.I never seen it in the comics so I'm not sure if this is accurate of the place or not.

I am looking forward to the next one as I got a hint on what will happen in that.

Wow! It took me a while to get around to reading this chapter but it was amazing. The rogue section was probably one of the best in the entire story. And i don't usually like Jean but you wrote her very well in this chapter. Can't wait to read more, in particular finding out what the Cuckoos are up to. Keep up the great work.

I liked once again seeing Laura in action. I really liked the innovation of the T-job. But I LOVED Rogue's DP and facial. Attagirl Rogue. Fucking like a champ!

And are we going to get an update on the Cuckoos and their mischief soon?