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November 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Just found this story and I'm loving it so far...great work. If you're taking requests...this is a weird one...but I'd like to see Moonstar Jubilee and Angel together...they're my three favorite X-men.
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November 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I'm gonna guess that the next one has Psylocke and Warpath and then Storm and Angel.
I agree with the people who suggested White Queen and Iceman. Emma's been getting dominated this whole story and probably has to scratch her dominatrix itch and given the history between them, Iceman would probably love/hate it.
I agree with the people who suggested White Queen and Iceman. Emma's been getting dominated this whole story and probably has to scratch her dominatrix itch and given the history between them, Iceman would probably love/hate it.
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November 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I definitely like this chapter 12 of yours as you really don't need to get too creative for sex after all so it's still nice to see more I guess you could say normal sex for a bit. Will we see some more of that now and then? Plus I do wonder what you have planned for next. I think I liked the Bobby/Rogue one the most for some reason I think I just liked their interactions the most out of this chapter. Anyways can't wait for more.
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November 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
update reminded me to finally finished off chapt 11. Quite creative in terms of pairings but well obviously they took me a while to get through.
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October 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I just realized that it's been ages since I last commented on this story. Apologies.
I did just reread the chapter that involved Bobby and Jean, and I really liked that one a lot; both characters were well-written, and the scenario worked quite well for them, given their history together. I also appreciated the uses of their powers.
The last three or four chapters have been kinda "meh" for me, mostly because I haven't much cared for any of the pairings (or groupings). The Kitty-Jubilee-Wolverine scene was probably amazing for Wolverine fans, something that they've been clamoring to see since maybe the mid-90's or so; as I mentioned in a previous review, I detest Wolverine, so what otherwise would've been a good threesome was limited by my dislike for one of the participants. That said, I've noticed a preponderance of hetero sex, which I know is your preference for writing; while I'm not advocating a sudden influx of M/M or F/F scenes, I think tossing one or two (esp. F/F) might provide for an interesting twist, esp. if the characters you decide to write as bi surprise us as readers (ex: Emma would not be surprising, but Psylocke might be). This ritual is a chance for EVERYONE to experiment and explore their sexualities, right? ;)
I did just reread the chapter that involved Bobby and Jean, and I really liked that one a lot; both characters were well-written, and the scenario worked quite well for them, given their history together. I also appreciated the uses of their powers.
The last three or four chapters have been kinda "meh" for me, mostly because I haven't much cared for any of the pairings (or groupings). The Kitty-Jubilee-Wolverine scene was probably amazing for Wolverine fans, something that they've been clamoring to see since maybe the mid-90's or so; as I mentioned in a previous review, I detest Wolverine, so what otherwise would've been a good threesome was limited by my dislike for one of the participants. That said, I've noticed a preponderance of hetero sex, which I know is your preference for writing; while I'm not advocating a sudden influx of M/M or F/F scenes, I think tossing one or two (esp. F/F) might provide for an interesting twist, esp. if the characters you decide to write as bi surprise us as readers (ex: Emma would not be surprising, but Psylocke might be). This ritual is a chance for EVERYONE to experiment and explore their sexualities, right? ;)
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October 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well I think I liked the Alex/Amara scene the most at least it was the one that really stood out to me since I don't remember you ever really doing a Femdom like this before so it's nice to see you try something new like this or at least something you don't usually do as it helps keep things interesting and fresher. So good with that and from how you hinted at the next chapter I really am looking forward to what will happen in that one.
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October 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Interesting take there with the Wolverine threesome. Don't know if you take suggestions but here goes:
Iceman/Emma
Iceman/Storm
Iceman/Rogue
Those three are because of their history or an elemental theme going on in the seond one.
Surge/Hellion
Jean/Warren
Gambit/Laura
Scott/Rogue
Iceman/Emma
Iceman/Storm
Iceman/Rogue
Those three are because of their history or an elemental theme going on in the seond one.
Surge/Hellion
Jean/Warren
Gambit/Laura
Scott/Rogue
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September 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hey. Another great chapter. I particularly enjoyed the Wolverine/Jubilee/Kitty chapter. It was just amazing. As always I'll be looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the good work. And thanks for the support on my Rogue story.
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September 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Finally got around to reading this one. Didn't care for scott/ororo as much as i thought i would. I dunno, it seemed a bit similar to scott and amara really.
Noriko's scene with Sam though was very nice, i like the turn about from her earlier scenes. And Sam wanting something slower and gentler after his turn with domino.
Kitty seems to be getting a lot of attention. ;-P but logan/jubilee/kitty is pretty much a classic for x-men porn and for a reason. Still not a big fan of logan but the scene worked quite well anyway
Noriko's scene with Sam though was very nice, i like the turn about from her earlier scenes. And Sam wanting something slower and gentler after his turn with domino.
Kitty seems to be getting a lot of attention. ;-P but logan/jubilee/kitty is pretty much a classic for x-men porn and for a reason. Still not a big fan of logan but the scene worked quite well anyway
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September 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great pairings this chapter. I'd like your take on the Emma/Iceman relationship in a future chapter. Emma in the story is essentially a sex toy of whoever wants a piece of her, but for some reason I always saw Bobby kind of getting off on a beautiful woman exerting power over him, so maybe he would ask her to do it again.