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I may not like Emma, but her treatment throughout the fic just screams rape. It doesn't matter if she gave permission. What the X-Men and the Zodiacs did to her was disgraceful, and speaks very poorly of them as the supposed "good guys" and Human beings in general. For all Emma's faults, they sure stooped pretty damn low themselves. And for what? To atone for her sins? Couldn't there have been a more practical manner than being raped? And of course Amara wouldn't classify it as such. She doesn't want to be compared to her less than honorable relative. Yet she not only commissioned a gangbang/rape, but actually watched it, doing nothing to stop it. The ONLY saving grace is that Emma got to have her way afterwards. But despite that, I'm struggling to get past the whole rape thing. In my mind, this cannot be justified, even if she gave her consent.

You should write an Avengers vs X-Men type orgy next!

This story was amazing from start to finish. Every chapter was amazingly well done and I always looked forward to reading more. I hope you continue to write more in the future, I'm sure whatever it is whether it's a continuation of this story or a new one it will be great. Until then congratulations on an amazing story.

The next orgy whould be X men vs. Avengers themed

You have crafted a magnificent piece of writing here. I loved where and how you went through the celebration showing us much but not everything. I highly enjoy the hedonism and decadence, especially in that you kept them ubiquitous and secondary to emotion and character.

Personally I was missing Beast. He has always been a favorite of mine. I enjoyed his epilogue inclusion.

Bravo, congratulations on reaching the end.

Well all good things have to end and I think you covered pretty much all the major points if there was anything left it was most likely just little things that wouldn't have changed much. It was a good story and I enjoyed it and I felt you ended it on a good note as well. I do hope so see a bit more from this world at some point when you get some ideas but that's up to you. All in all it was a good time and I can't wait for whatever story you come up with next. Ending with the couples and then the singles also having some fun of their own made sense.

As always this is a great new chapter. I really liked Rogue and Nightcrawler playing with the boundaries of what's appropriate though it did seem a little rushed. And the Mystique chapter was really nice, I liked how it was pretty much a bunch of mini scenes, it made for a really interesting story. I can;t wait to see what you have planned for the final chapter. Whatever it is I'm sure it will be great.

Well that was an interesting chapter with them exploring Mystique's past loves (that we know about at least) and how each and every one of them would be different from her memories of them as well. Then of course all of them each getting a piece of her since I bet they all needed a little payback for all the things she's done over the years. Well for the most of them, I don't think guys like Namor really ever interacted with her before at least not that I know of.

The Kurt and Rogue scene was nice although it seemed a little quick for some reason as it was over pretty fast, I also think you missed out on a reference there given that one of Kurt's old girlfriends Amanda had been his foster sister as well so it's not like Rogue would have been the first.

Anyways one last romp for them all huh? I wonder if you'll try out some new couples with this or new relationships. I would like to see Mystique and Bobby some more for the final part with some shape shifting fun. Like say shifting her tongue to be really long was something I don't think you've tried out with her before. Plus it will be interesting to see this story end and what you do after it. Maybe have one last scene between Hank and Agent Brand since there's isn't much about them and it would be nice to see a bit more of them before the end.

As always you give us another chapter of brightly and vividly illustrated sex. I also quite enjoy your near abuse of dropping the words uncanny and astonishing.

So any chance we can see more Hellion/X23, Iceman/Mystique or possibly see him with Emma in a solo setting or in a threeway with the two? Also what do you plan next? More X-men romps? Or expand into Marvel?