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person Anon
schedule December 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
yeeeessss!!!!! Awesome story!! I love the idea of Kurt being in charge and dom, but only to save a damsel in distress. Tres Nightcrawler. Standing up naked and bowing was the icing on the cake that is Kurt's showmanship. Keep posting!
person Anon
schedule December 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
HOLY SHIT I NEED ANOTHER CHAPTER!!
person j
schedule November 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like the new ending to Chapter 15 much better. Can't wait for the next chapter.
person j
schedule October 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Does this mean that Kurt is in charge of her device? Very interesting.
person j
schedule October 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The plot thickens! Kurt's not going to be a happy camper!
person J
schedule October 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm rooting for them to get together. The long road with all the fights will be fun though.
person Loin
schedule October 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You deserve more than my half asleep on a cell phone reviews but this is what you get for some reason. This is a very good fic. The hot scenes are very hot and the storyline is embrasing. I hope you have an inspiring vacation. I look forward to more
person Loin
schedule October 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Your OC seems a minxy little bitch. I kinda like her and I kinda hate her. Good job. Also just a few thoughts:
1. She is asorbing his DNA and transforming. Gender is genetic.
2. I am a little suprised no one tried the "Magic Potion" trick ("Drink this" "What is it" "You dont want to know but it will keep you alive"