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person Jiffie
schedule March 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Logan's a trip! I love him even more now. About your X-man story after this one, is it a continuation to this, or is it a completely different one?
person K
schedule February 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Gah!!!! Cliffhanger!! Hope you update soon.
person Jiffie
schedule February 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this! I really love your OC, it's been a while since I've read good wit. It's kind of weird, normally I'd find her stubbornness annoying, since practically everything she does is wrong and ends badly (even if she has good reason for it, she's still very rash) but it's something about her that just make it charming. One thing I have to say is that I love the sex scenes, when people do rape, they like to make it very obnoxious; either it gets all whiny and sappy, or it gets really fake and fetish (you know, some how madly falling in love due to rape), but you've got a nice tone with the setting, and it all feels very realistic. I'll admit that I enjoy reading rape stories, but I felt a special little connection on that chapter when she gave herself willingly (as willing as a drugged person can) and it was very cute.

You should be proud of yourself, not many people can right a love/hate relationship and do it right; you, man, has done it right!
person Katie
schedule February 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! I love it! I hope you haven't given up on this, it's awesome and I'll be heart broken if it gets abandoned.
schedule January 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Not to pressure you, but *cough*-youshouldupdatesoon-*cough*
schedule December 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yeeeess!!! Two chapters in a row!?! Fantastic!! I was wondering when ol' Mr. Sinister would be rearing his ugly head. You've got me waiting for his nasty plans on the edge of my seat. Post soon!
schedule December 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yayyy!! A new chapter!! Scott treating her like the enemy was just spot on. He really grinds my gears. I'm concerned for Kate though; I just keep picturing her in a suspended animation tube like Juggernaut, ha ha. Don't get me wrong, I LIVE for h/c, but that's just a sad way to live. Keep up the good work! Update soon or my brain will explode!!
person J
schedule December 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
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I don't know how often you update, but I'm just letting you know, I check for a new chapter almost every day. ^.^

Me too! It feels like Kate is finally starting to warm up to Kurt; hopefully they will reach an understanding before Sinster does something else.

person k
schedule December 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have to say, the only thing I think that would ruin this story is turning it into a pregnancy story. All this unprotected sex is making me nervous, ha ha. I'm only hoping her weak immune system is making impregnation impossible; at least while she still doesn't like Kurt so much.
person K
schedule December 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I don't know how often you update, but I'm just letting you know, I check for a new chapter almost every day. ^.^