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for X-Men: Surprise Party

by johntrumancarteriii

person RWBY
schedule November 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Very hot! Psylocke sure can be devious in bed! Hope you'll write more of Emma/Scott/Betsy's explorations of their mutant abilities.

Should you do another, would it be too much to add Carol Danvers to the mix as well?

Thanks for the read!
person dsone222
schedule August 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, wow. So very hot. It's rare to find (well-written) stories like this. Please write more. ;)
schedule August 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Nice job! This was a great, kinky little one-shot between some of my favorite characters. There aren't a whole lot of stories that explore Scott and Emma's relationship and even fewer that have much fun with it. Bringing Psylocke into the mix worked perfectly and it made for an entertaining and quite hot story. Given Emma Frost's background and the kind of things she probably did at the Hellfire Club, it would make sense that she would be okay with letting Psylocke join in. More so than Jean at least. The erotic scenes were very nicely done! I really compliment you on finding a way to make them interesting and entertaining. Great job! I hope you do more stories like this. Until next time, take care and best wishes!

Regards,
MarvelMaster616