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December 17, 2017 at 12:00 AM
A great little piece, sad it wasn't continued.
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September 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I think it's really sad this hasn't been updated in forever. I'm pretty sure I already reviewed once, but I just wanted to say I repeatedly check back here just to see if this might have been updated. *sigh*
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September 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very nice job on the story so far, I hope you'll update this story soon.
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May 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit the Spider-Man/Storm pairing is really, really off the wall.
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So why do I like it so much?
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So why do I like it so much?
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April 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am a fan of unconventional fics and your Storm/Peter pairing is awesome!!! I loved your method of getting them going.
Genius!!!
Please continue this excellent story!
Genius!!!
Please continue this excellent story!
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March 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Okay. I LOVED this. Not a pairing I would have come up with in my wildest dreams, but one that I love now. Great work building the point of view for each of them; it was convincing that I was inside both of their heads with the internal monologues you wrote.
Can't wait to see what you bring next. This was a lot of fun to read so far.
Can't wait to see what you bring next. This was a lot of fun to read so far.
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March 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I really liked this. I hate so much Storm being married to T'Challa so the fact that she hooked up with Spidey made me like it even more. LOL
This story is really awesome and you really "know" the characters. I can't wait to read more from you.
This story is really awesome and you really "know" the characters. I can't wait to read more from you.
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March 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Don't think I've ever read a Storm/Spider-Man story before. Kind of odd, I never liked the Storm/Black Panther marriage as it came out of nowhere and they force it together by making up some bullshit backstory that never happened to make it work. And I never liked how the Peter/MJ marriage was destroyed (I stopped reading Spider-Man comics because of that after 2 decades of being a loyal fan)
So this is a unique thing that I have to wonder about, you did explain the OOCness of several characters and I never liked the new girlfriend (read up on her) honestly with things like Ms. Marvel liking him, or his old flames they choose something that reads like someone's Mary Sue OC from a fan fiction to be the girlfriend.
So I'm wondering how this will work out, especially since Storm is fairly well known, there aren't really a lot of tall, dark skinned, white haired and blue eyed women in the world after all. Have to wonder what she'll do while living in New York and will she keep going as Storm and be a New York hero around with Peter? Plus this is M/F/F so I have do wonder who will join them. Given that Storm is a free spirit (hell she used to walk around naked without seeing any problems about nudity in the X-Men books at first) so I have to wonder if she's into sharing Peter with another woman.
Do we get to vote on who it can be or is that already planned? As long as it's MJ, Black Cat and/or Ms. Marvel I don't mind lol. Although given that this woman wants revenge against MJ too (why I have no idea, maybe just jealous of her past relationship with him?) so MJ most likely will show up and I hope for her to get involved with Peter and Storm lol. That would be epic.
I also hope the next sex scene is a bit more drawn out, since this was pretty short but then again they couldn't really do much of anything. So I can't wait until they can take their time and enjoy each other.
So this is a unique thing that I have to wonder about, you did explain the OOCness of several characters and I never liked the new girlfriend (read up on her) honestly with things like Ms. Marvel liking him, or his old flames they choose something that reads like someone's Mary Sue OC from a fan fiction to be the girlfriend.
So I'm wondering how this will work out, especially since Storm is fairly well known, there aren't really a lot of tall, dark skinned, white haired and blue eyed women in the world after all. Have to wonder what she'll do while living in New York and will she keep going as Storm and be a New York hero around with Peter? Plus this is M/F/F so I have do wonder who will join them. Given that Storm is a free spirit (hell she used to walk around naked without seeing any problems about nudity in the X-Men books at first) so I have to wonder if she's into sharing Peter with another woman.
Do we get to vote on who it can be or is that already planned? As long as it's MJ, Black Cat and/or Ms. Marvel I don't mind lol. Although given that this woman wants revenge against MJ too (why I have no idea, maybe just jealous of her past relationship with him?) so MJ most likely will show up and I hope for her to get involved with Peter and Storm lol. That would be epic.
I also hope the next sex scene is a bit more drawn out, since this was pretty short but then again they couldn't really do much of anything. So I can't wait until they can take their time and enjoy each other.