rate_review Reviews

Another great chapter. Very introspective of Jean Grey. I like it because you don't see too many stories like this on this site. I applaud you for making one and making it good! I see you did some flashbacks of the old Phoenix Saga, including her little stint as the Black Queen. I was a bit dismayed that you didn't go into further detail with her and Wayneguard. I figured he wouldn't be able to keep his hands off her if he was controlling her. Who would? lol It was all very emotional and very well-done. I really like it and I look forward to seeing more. Where do you plan on taking this? Will Jean Grey be the only one featured? When will the next graphic scene show up? Please keep up the good work! I really enjoy your stories and hope you write more.

Nice little story here! There's nothing graphic, but it's a nice graphic depiction of the kind of thoughts Jean Grey probably confronts on a daily basis. I'm sure she knows all the cute porno lingo like 'pearl necklace.' She probably knows more than any ordinary woman would care to know. lol I like how you had her pick up on thoughts and have to deal with other men oogling her. I'm glad you had her reject Carlos's advances as well. It just wouldn't be in her character to be too forward.

I really enjoy your stories and I hope you continue to write them. I really like how you write Jean Grey and I hope you have more stories planned. Thanks again and I look forward to seeing more in the future.

An intriguing start, and so subtle an homage there that I barely noticed the reference ;-P