rate_review Reviews

These two are adorable. I enjoyed the heck out of this story. I agree w/ the previous reviewer who said we don't see a lot of good fanfic involving Lorna, and this story bucks that trend.

I've never been a big fan of Bobby and Lorna. Chuck Austen especially sort of ruined Lorna for me. But this was pretty good. It was very cute.

I intended to read this sooner, but I got caught up in other things!

I liked it as a whole. I don't normally go for straight and simple, romantic sex, but I think this did good with it and I'll likely look back to it when I need to write some of my own soon for an idea of how to build it at least decently. The main reason I read this was because it has Lorna in it, when she never gets much love in fanworks or even official ones. Also, it takes Lorna in a relationship in a good way. Most of what I've seen of Lorna in her relationship with Alex out of Marvel has been Lorna acting like a weak idiot, it's nice to read someone who can write her in a relationship that actually makes the relationship look like a good thing. Thanks for writing and sharing. :)

I just read the three stories, enjoyed all of them, and would love to see more. Though given that these all had a similar romantic tone to them (understandable given they were first experiences), I'd love to see the next one be rougher and a little more aggressive. Or maybe nastier, sexually speaking. Perhaps even a threesome?