rate_review Reviews

Amazing story! I adore reading good slash and I love reading confused sexuality-centric stories even more. Great job. I would love to see a sequel, too.

My only gripe is Logan picking up Scott and carrying him to bed. I can never see two men doing that; I see that happening in a lot of slash fic here, so it's certainly not wrong. It just strikes a silly mental image with me, instead of a sexy one.

But the rest was sexy. Logan's approach was relatively believable, and you made me actually like movie Scott. Jean was also just about perfect, her reactions were very real. Good job. Doesn't need much beta'ing, I only saw about three typos.