AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for X4: The Queen Of Hearts

by BlackWodin

person Icejade
schedule August 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Just read the latest chapter - loved it! I hope you continue to fight the good fight and remain cancer-free!
I love how you incorporate the comics into the movie-verse with this story while simultaneously adding in all that Cajun deliciousness :) Hope you update again really soon!
person nappyfro81
schedule December 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story!
schedule November 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think you made a minor error. The woman who they rescue at the start says her name is Jane, then you say it's Diane. Diane is (also?) the name of the hurricane. Just thought you might wanna clarify that one. I think it'd be awesomely ironic if the woman's name is the same as the hurricane.

Also, phenomenal work w/ Dust. Don't know much about the character, but her scene was by far my favorite part. I love her attitude and her faith, and her attitude about faith. I can tell she's gonna be hella sweet.
person OmegaX
schedule November 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I've been pretty quiet as of late, simply because I hate feeling like a parrot, especially when everyone else can sum up just how epic each chapter can be easier than I can, but, as you've started a new series, I just have to drop in and give my thoughts.


Quite simply, bravo. Not just for the alternate universe via X3 - Ace of Spades, but for continuing that even further, with Queen. I cannot wait to see how far you go with this.

First off though, having the "Cure" potentially work as a monthly inhibitor is yet another way I can see our beloved ROMY being able to further explore their relationship, whenever they get to that point. (I will say, you've done a great job of not just rushing to the smut, and actually building up the psudo-tension between the two over the course of the story. I cannot wait for the newest chapter next week!)
person Scorpia
schedule November 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! The story continues!!! I can't wait to read more.